Reviews for Spiral
Tui chapter 9 . 9/16
It has been 5 years and still have no idea what's going on and how it's going to finish... if ever
Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 7/31
This really isnt something I would enjoy im afraid, bye.
Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 7/31
I didnt like it at all to be honest, it was way to sensual really, and quite inappropriate. I dont mind the OOC that much, but I think this simply wanders too far from K-on to actually qualify as K-on, they have the names, the songs, thats it.

First chapter though.
Durpz chapter 11 . 11/27/2016
THIS STORY I SWEARRRRRRRRR. I love this story, its so interesting and I WANT MORRRE. ~" this story made me lose my cool quite a bit from all the interesting POV's and i'd like to see more. no rush though, ik life doesn't let us do things we want sometimes, but i'd REALLY like to see more
ThatWriterGuy7 chapter 10 . 8/18/2016
I'd like to add I was left crying after the end of this fic, my mind was totally blown, though this story may be rough and totally unforgiving it is a thing of beauty and clarity that has helped me understand the characters of K-on. Thank you for the story and i'm sorry about my other review i was a crazy bundle of emotions and i couldn't think straight :( i wish you the best.
Music-By-HY chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
i read this fanfic 3 times and i don't lose the hope to you update! ** thank you for this amazing story
Lunaris-wind chapter 11 . 3/28/2016
Obviously, you stopped writing this 4 years ago, but that's a shame. It's really quite good.
ThatWriterGuy7 chapter 11 . 12/15/2015
I'm sorry but you are SO talented and you're writing is SO powerful you simply CANNOT end the story like this!
Every story has an end and this is no ending.
Azusa deserves a happy ending and so do I or these feelings, frozen characters and tearful plot will spin around me forever more.
So please for the sake of you're readers finish this, even if it is rushed and unrealistic it needs an ending. It's been 3 maybe 4 years now.
C A Moore chapter 11 . 11/7/2015
Very interesting dark reflection of group dynamics, kept me eagerly reading.
xLaShay chapter 11 . 10/23/2015
Uff.. It's intense... heart wrenching.. I don't really know what to say about all of this.. After reading the first chapter I was really curious so I continue.. A few hours later I wasn't able to take my eyes off of this story.. Now after finishing the "last chapter" I feel exhausted.. and sad. I really hope that this is going to continue sometime, 'cause I'm longing for an ending..

(Btw I think I really like it, when characters were going wild and looking somehow ooc. Circumstances changes people and in every story are another circumstance, does it make sense? sorry my English isn't good after all xD)
Disney lovers 101 chapter 11 . 8/11/2015
Please update!
adamkitsune7 chapter 11 . 7/17/2015
Please continue this story...its a good story
JuliaKun chapter 11 . 5/10/2015
That... was... SO. DAMN. GREAT.

Seriously dude, I don't know how you do it but damn, you're stories always pull me in (pfft like Mugi's innocence, luring people in lol. got that from this story).

I'd love to see how this one turn out. I hate myself for not discovering you, a wonderful writer, before.

Welp, that's all and good luck!
NotAProdigy chapter 11 . 5/6/2015
i don't think you'll ever update this fanfic again but after re-reading it for the 5th time i remembered how beautiful it is... it hurts to always end up here after reading the whole thing though /sigh/ i wish i knew how it would end...
psycoticfart chapter 11 . 2/2/2015
I ain't gonna lie, I came for the Yuri, but this story is so much more than just that. This is a powerful read
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