Reviews for Spiral
adamkitsune7 chapter 11 . 7/17
Please continue this story...its a good story
Julia-kun chapter 11 . 5/10
That... was... SO. DAMN. GREAT.

Seriously dude, I don't know how you do it but damn, you're stories always pull me in (pfft like Mugi's innocence, luring people in lol. got that from this story).

I'd love to see how this one turn out. I hate myself for not discovering you, a wonderful writer, before.

Welp, that's all and good luck!
NotAProdigy chapter 11 . 5/6
i don't think you'll ever update this fanfic again but after re-reading it for the 5th time i remembered how beautiful it is... it hurts to always end up here after reading the whole thing though /sigh/ i wish i knew how it would end...
psycoticfart chapter 11 . 2/2
I ain't gonna lie, I came for the Yuri, but this story is so much more than just that. This is a powerful read
Yui x Azusa chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
Dude awesome fanfic, should definately write more! Don't waste it! YuiAzu
JayXNitro chapter 11 . 10/14/2014
FUCK! BRO. ITS BEEN TWO FRICKEN YEARS. ALMOST 3! I CAN'T WAIT!

PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU! UPDATEE!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22/2014
Do you hear that? That is the sound of minds being blown.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Well. that was
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...interesting?
And hot.
YFIQ chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
I can see the symbolism on the part where she bit into the fruit toward the end of this chapter. I think I did...either way, good work so far.

I'll get back to it tomorrow.
Timmy Sparx chapter 11 . 4/8/2014
Wow... That has so many feels... I mean wow! I'm lost... I mean wow... I really don't know what to say... Umm... I can't write constructive for this, there's nothing I can say that will add anything! I feel so useless typing this review, but I just can't not. Too many feels, too many. It's killing me. I think I might just leave it at THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING and go and recollect some thoughts on it... Hehe... Keep it up and all that... BYE!
Akira Rein chapter 11 . 3/16/2014
yo chibi chan. its been awhile since i checked on here but i came back just for spiral and no, thank you. i know you're busy as hell but please update this. i really hope you get this.

much love chibi chan.
VinnyValient chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
To think this all spawned from an impulse.
You never failed to keep my attention. For a while, I wasn't sure whether I was reading because it was so different from the norm and interesting or because it was good. Turns out, it's great (and interesting and everything). The mysteriousness of the whole thing entices me to read further- how crazy it has turned out for HTT with enough hints about the past to suggest but not reveal what happened and when. Some plot twists to cliff hangers to pull the reader deeper into the story as the whole thing is observed. It's brilliant how the POV is from an ordinary Azusa so whilst the readers are in an alien environment (HTT is crazy) we're in that environment with a sane Azusa.

Seriously, I was not prepared for something like this when I clicked on this Fan Fiction and well deserving of being the second most favourited and followed K-ON fan fiction on this site (i don't know about cross-overs, as of 9th february 2014) and I can't wait for more!
VinnyValient chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
Just read chapter 2: mind blown.
After reading (and writing) fuwa fuwa fan fics, this is definitely a change from the norm so i'm fairly surprised (underexageration of my feelings)
When Yui was first described, i laughed because it wasn't like the Yui in the anime at all. Yet I'm really enjoying reading this. I guess i'm curious on how this will carry on and what will happen. The characters have very 'powerful' personalities that are reminiscent of their anime selves so it still feels like K-ON yet it isn't.
This is awesome so far, time to keep reading...
shininglily chapter 11 . 1/23/2014
It is really too bad that this story was never continued...it just stops here. There is always my imagination to fill in the gaps, I guess. :P
Kon chapter 11 . 12/22/2013
Amazing story. Beautifully written. Please update!
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