Reviews for Little Stars
MissDonnie chapter 27 . 5/9/2012
wow...what can I say...what a great, great chapter...
eblonde chapter 27 . 5/8/2012
Aww ( this is just so sad. poor Thea. poor jane. poor everyone! this is so beautifully written it make me want to cry! I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!

please update soon! xx
sharpestsatire chapter 26 . 5/8/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! -flips out- Post more!
MentalistLover chapter 26 . 5/8/2012
This was SO good! I was completely enthralled and on the edge of my seat the whole time. Thea's not really dead, right? You wouldn't do that, right? And you won't leave us hanging with this cliffie for very long, right? (This is me begging for you to come back. Now.)
MissDonnie chapter 26 . 5/7/2012
each chapter just keeps getting better...
blueeyedmentalistfan chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
This chapter is so sad but so good. I hope Chicory is alive by the end of this story. My heart cant take it if he dies. :-( Love the last scene when Jane tackles the idiot.
xanderseye chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
OMG, how good was this chapter! It had me on the edge of my seat, can't wait for the next installment, hope you update really, really soon.
My Beautiful Ending chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
I loved the choose your own adventure books!

but it was nerve wracking because you'd turn the page and OH NO I"M DEAD NOW.



lolly2222 chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
3 more chapters left, I'm both sad this is ending soon but happy you will be moving on with the overall story, to Redress maybe? hint hint...

Oh it is so despairing to realise how much Jane is hiding from Lisbon, the vomiting, shakes etc. I cant wait to read their showdown. I must say you captured Janes logic very well.

Oh poor Thea dont leave us waiting too long on her fate...
Cazza799 chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
Fantastic chapter and what a cliffhanger. I think I like Lisbon's POV the best in this story and you really write her very well. I enjoy reading her insights into Jane especially.
ClaMiAl chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
Ooooh, how very exciting! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
eblonde chapter 26 . 5/6/2012
Omg please update! this is just too good! I can't wait for the next chapter!
MentalistLover chapter 25 . 5/1/2012
Thanks for the update on your profile page. Now I know that HoC really is a different universe than the rest of your stories, and I'm glad because that means we still have lots of things for Lisbon to discover and some good interaction btwn L and J for this story. Thanks for clearing that up for me! :)
Guest chapter 25 . 4/23/2012
Finally back to a more focused Jane and Lisbon view. I lost a little bit interest on this fiction when it over-focused the girl and children, while it may be interesting for you as a writer, it wasn't as much compelling to me as a Mentalist fan. I'm sure you'd do wonderful things with your insight, it's just a preferance of mine I guess. It just seemed slightly off toppic, while being on toppic of course. I can't really explain. That being said, I was wondering if there'd be an update today and if we're nearing the end?
MentalistLover chapter 25 . 4/22/2012
Oh, how you are spoiling us! Thank you for all these updates!

I very much enjoyed getting Jane's POV in this chapter. You did a fine job, as always. You depicted Jane's desperation so poignantly. Really, with his prior/current physical illness, Thea's resemblance to Charlotte, Thea's serious health/psychological issues, and the similarity of Jane's and Thea's pasts, I don't know how Jane is managing to keep ANY hold on his sanity. My stomach actually churned when I read this one. I won't even go into the tears welling in my eyes. :(

"It's not so much what I do with the quiet. It's what the quiet does to me." I'm with you, Jane.

Based on your hints so far, it sounds like Jane's past in this story is going to be what we discovered in House of Cards. I wasn't sure if Lisbon was going to get any real, concrete info about his childhood trauma in this story, and since I know how it all came out in HOC, I'm interested to see what, if anything, she gets out of him in this one. It seems to me she's gonna be one p- off lady if he completely blows her off after this whole deal!
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