Reviews for The Walls of Ba Sing Se
The Lady Ayla chapter 19 . 8/16/2017
Simply amazing! This was my first Jetko fic and I can easily say that I am impressed. I read the whole thing in one go. So sad to see that the sequel hasn't updated in four years :( Let's hope that this gem hasn't been discontinued. Its too good to be abandoned...
TidePoolDevil chapter 19 . 12/24/2016
amuto1 chapter 19 . 9/4/2015
i really like this story a lot please continue the sequel
Guest chapter 19 . 9/4/2015
Hey I love your story but I can find the sequel
SiriuslyPink chapter 16 . 3/18/2015
You do know that the Bei Fongs don't live in Ba Sing Se?
the-little-guru chapter 6 . 2/17/2015
You did such a good job with the cultural aspects of this fic.
the-little-guru chapter 4 . 2/17/2015
Oh no...seems like jet has competition. I find i cute how uncle tries to chat up everybody.
the-little-guru chapter 3 . 2/17/2015
Jet is unnervingly like Azula. Except more socially ept.
the-little-guru chapter 2 . 2/17/2015
This is so well written. I like how you shifted to a more "sardonic" style of writing when you got to Zuko's perspective. Also, It's hilarious how Zuko has literally zero control over his emotions! He seems like the kind of person who scowls and blushes over everything.
the-little-guru chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Jet is seriously a psycho, but surprising in character, in a very cracked sort of way.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hahahahahaah no
Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 19 . 2/3/2014
septimaluna chapter 18 . 12/23/2013
i have just finished reading this and i totally love it, forget happy endings, i was really happy when zuko got angry and began to throw blue fire because Jet is an ass so even if they see each other again, zuko betrays his father and joins the avatar they should not get back together i mean the guy sold him! that's not the sort of thing you just forget u.u, from katara it was undestandable she didnt have any reason to act in any other way but Jet is a completly different story
the other thing that let me thinking was zuko's comment about azula, if she always feels like that, i think that now with a better understanding of her They would develop a more brotherly relationship. it would be really nice to read that.
any way, stoping my rambling , the fic was lovely and i wait for the sequel c:
ThePhoenixFlight1000 chapter 18 . 12/8/2013
I loved this it was so good and i love seeing what would have happened if Jet and Zuko had formed a relationship. I love this!
RueBroadway chapter 18 . 11/17/2013
This...Wow. You've reignited my love for Jetko. I couldn't stop reading and with each chapter it only got better. The characterization, the dialogue- so mindblowingly true and consistent. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. Thank you for all your hard work :o)
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