Reviews for Maybe His Love Just Wasn't Enough
Alie-yaoi chapter 10 . 2/10
I like
CaptainMeghanSparrow chapter 1 . 1/10
This story is written very badly, the characters are not believable, you need to add quotes around dialogue as well as improve your grammar. Your style of writing lacks quality, seeing as you add very random things in that don't fit in with the non exsistant story line. It needs to be completely rewritten. Overall, quite disappointing.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 12 . 7/3/2013
Not bad, your spelling and grammar are a little off, but not badly so. by the way, when one talks it;s "" not - , just saying. Another thing, your computer has a little thing that looks like a tick, it's a spell checker, using it would be useful! Otherwise, the story was quite good. I look forward to what you do next!
FlyingSquirrelGurl chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
You should make a sequal for this story . 3
Bella chapter 10 . 6/22/2013
I love the part when she is a princess
snowymistfulowl chapter 10 . 6/21/2013
ended to early and i think if u could of not put so much drama in one page and in the story oh and if you were going to make her get pregnant u should of explained it more
Wishfull-star chapter 11 . 6/19/2013
love the story please do a sequel I only just read it but I loved it:)
BrittanySidlo chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
Man I really wish you have continued the story it was really really good.
jessabelle witloft chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
yes a happy every after yay awesome story make a sequel to it please but where maybe say the Irish coven attacks the volturi and Jessica joins them and plains to attack bella
Aminah chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
Your a great author!
2AwEsOmE4yA chapter 10 . 3/29/2013
OMG ITS AWESOME!
Emily chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
Who is dickward?
MaxRideandPercyJackson4ever chapter 10 . 2/18/2013
awesome story. love the Aerosmith song you put in there.
Sicily Maine chapter 10 . 1/10/2013
I loved it
curiosity-striks-the-mind chapter 6 . 12/22/2012
EVIL BELLA FTW!
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