Reviews for My Aborted Child
XilliaRuto chapter 4 . 8/13/2015
Now this is setting up an interesting element in the story. Is Danny Vlad's child or was Maddie pregnant before and didn't recognize the symptoms. Say because of her husband's standing with Maddie's family adding on to hormones and irritation being possible factors for what drove her to seek out Vlad in the first place. The powers Danny will have and his ghost DNA, as a mild observation, seem to point Vald as the father. A super angsty person like myself would like to read it as Danny being Jack's, the heart feels it in its soul. Though I do find it odd Jazz wasn't also taken aback by her mother's admission of infidelity, granted finding your parent had aborted a sibling is jarring. Would love to see more chapters of the Fenton's and Maddie's interactions with her family as they relate to Jack/Jazz.
Okie Then chapter 9 . 8/12/2015
So this chapter was badly rushed, several areas that needed details or further expansion didn't. That being said this is a very unique story and one that needs to be finished.
mymag99 chapter 9 . 8/2/2015
please write more and update soon.
TorturedGuitar chapter 9 . 3/8/2015
If you ever update it again I'll follow this...
Ivyyyyyy chapter 9 . 6/1/2014
This was such a great story. Well done, on all accounts!
Ivyyyyyy chapter 8 . 6/1/2014
This is a perfect chapter. The humor, and use of Esperanto, was brilliant. Well done!
Ivyyyyyy chapter 7 . 6/1/2014
Ah, friendship. They ARE best friends forever, no matter what, after all.
Ivyyyyyy chapter 6 . 6/1/2014
Oh man. That subconscious sibling rivalry was great, and Jazz is quite the snarky one as an only child, huh?
Ivyyyyyy chapter 5 . 6/1/2014
Ahaa. Splendid chapter.
Ivyyyyyy chapter 4 . 6/1/2014
Ohoho WOW. That confusion was really somethin', huh?

*Ghost portalllllllll
Ivyyyyyy chapter 3 . 6/1/2014
Ahaha. :3

This was quite an enjoyable chapter.
Ivyyyyyy chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
Wow. This is actually a quite interesting concept. Well done!
Ivyyyyyy chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Quite odd start...but definitely interesting.
storyholder chapter 4 . 5/1/2014
WHAT!
Umbra.Venator chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
pretty good storyline...pity it end
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