|Reviews for They Shook Hands : Year 1 (Old Version)|
| HokageMangaVox chapter 1 . 7/2
| PurpleTabby chapter 1 . 6/26
In "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows" Harry brings Draco's wand to Ollivander to identify and Ollivander describes the wand as such, “Hawthorn and unicorn hair. Ten inches precisely. Reasonably springy. This was the wand of Draco Malfoy.”
I don't mean to be so nitpicky but I just thought you might want to know. I'm not expecting you to change anything! I like the fact that he has a dragon heartstring core!
Love this story and have read it (what is it now? I've lost count) times.
| Femalefan chapter 20 . 5/6
I assume Tim is meant to be Theodore. Also canon!Blaise is a boy and you should have indicated, that Blaise would be a girl in this series (at least the old version) in an Author's Note.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/5
Hermione would have become a Ravenclaw, not a Hufflepuff!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/25
They may have done the best thing for Hermione regardless of bias
| CaramelVI chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Even though I find the concept very intriguing and well written on top! Props on that
There are still a few things that bothered me a bit Harry seemed to act so untypical... Harry seemed a bit to feeble and afraid to stand up for what he believes to be right! :I
Also we've never seen Hagrid drunk except for Aragogs funeral when he and Slughorn got drunk xd It seemed a bit untypical! What I'd like to know as well, what happened to Hedwig? xD I think you could have been generous enough to Hagrid give Harry his birthday present lol
I think you might be aware of this by now, but Dracos wand description (you can find that info on pottermore) Just putting that info out there! :)
I definitely keep on reading, but I don't think I'll be able to shake of this feeling unfamilar xD
Anyway hope you keep tweaking the story here and there, all the best to you! (if you already rewrote the story and put it up again, I'm sure I'll be able to find it after I finish with the comment xd)
| whitecanary1611 chapter 3 . 12/26/2015
I usually review in the last chapter but i gotta say im loving your story is really good like wow good to be honest im impresssed and this is beraly the third chapter. Congratulations in your story and if its incompleted i hope you finish it
| Icy chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
Blaise is male
| SonofForossa chapter 14 . 11/2/2015
I'm genuinely impressed; you made Crabbe and Goyle fun, interesting characters. Seriously, that's awesome.
| TroyRaju chapter 10 . 10/8/2015
ABSOLUTELY EPIC can't wait to see what you've done with the rest of the done with this on chapter 11 so far so good
| Ossu chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
This is very well written !
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2015
At first I didn't like it but thought it would get better ... But it didn't
| Jackal Queen chapter 7 . 8/1/2015
PLEASE DONT BASH THE TWINS OR CHARLIE THEYRE THE AWESOME WEASLEYS I CANT BEAR TO SEE A UNIVERSE WHERE THE TWINS DONT LOVE HARRY AN VICE VERSA NOT MENTION WWW
| Dina Malfoy chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Harry Potter Ron Weasley And Hermine Granger Should Not Be Best Friend Anymore At All
| Dina Malfoy chapter 3 . 6/30/2015
Let's Put That On The Disney Channel Tonight Pretty Please With ICE CREAM SUNDAE On Top