Reviews for McKeller Flash Fiction Challenge Submissions
koinekid chapter 5 . 4/3/2011
Forget laughter, that is the best medicine of all.
koinekid chapter 4 . 4/3/2011
Cute story. Thanks for sharing.
BetherdyBabe chapter 5 . 4/2/2011
Heartfelt opinion: we were ushered to the wrong side of that darn curtain.

Secondary opinion: magnificent reads (yes, read it not twice but three times so far).

I also liked how you portrayed everyone. From I've been run over by a hive to comfortably numb by our battered Rodney. The bold yet 'secretive' actions to take away that pain by Jennifer, and John's intrigue. All beautiful. Can't wait for the next one.

DaniWilder chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
John slow on the uptake? It is bound to happen some time.

A very cute addition to your stories.

DaniWilder chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
A nice way to get reaquainted after a long separation ;-)

They must have been together a long, long time to get away with these sentiments ;-D

ElisaD263 chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
"Comfortably numb."...LOL! Jennifer sure has a great bed side manner..well, for her man anyway! ;-)

Thanks for the smile! _
ElisaD263 chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Love reading how Jennifer realized she needed a shower...LOL!

When she finally gets the chance to take a shower, she has another surprise...Rodney! Nice! _
theicemenace chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
Numb? I would think that his pain was only beginning. ;-)
theicemenace chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Love it! Only when you love someone and are loved in return can you tell each other you stink.

Off to read the next one...
Whirlwind421 chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
Very cute!
IantojJackh chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
Ha ha. Always an effective pain reliever
hifield chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Now that's love! Maybe they can burn both sets of clothes at the same time.
hifield chapter 3 . 4/1/2011
That was a great chapter - very well written ... had me smiling!
hifield chapter 2 . 4/1/2011
As planned, you had me going for a minute there. Really enjoyed this little snippet!
IantojJackh chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Awesome addition. Love that a lot of flash prices are being posted. Keep them coming.
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