|Reviews for Carlisle's Pillow|
| TheSuperheroClub chapter 1 . 1/22
Okay I honestly read your title and everything but I had to read a couple comments to understand who's point of view it was from lol XD great story!
| Kazza18 chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Ha! I didn't read the title and thought it was written from Esme's, then a cat or dog's point of view! It made so much more sense after I read the title. Very good, loved it.
| Theadosia57 chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
This was really good, the angst of unrequited love, very cleverly done xx
| winterhorses chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
I always like Ensign Kim, lol. Thanks for writing!
| TinaF chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
| bloomsburry chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
ahaha...so cuts ahaha...it would have been very interesting if you didn't place a hint in your title. like it sounded like a person but actually it SAS Carlisle's pillow
| madeezinezinc chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
God I love this. I've read it about five times now. I love the idea of Carlisle and Bella. Great job
| RowanBronze chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
This is so clever! Very well written! Loved this story! Thank you for sharing!
| A Midnight Song chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
A sensual temptation of having him under the sheets in my bed...
| Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
great one shot x
| Kagome101 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. Now I feel slow. I thought the person talking was a cat, or another girl. I didn't know that was a pillow. I got it at the end of the story when I read the title. lol.
| darkroselight chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! Very clever.
Poor pillow, left out of all the fun again I see. To bad for her that, in my eye's, Carlisle belongs completely to you Zoya. No one writes Carlisle like you do, no one could.
| Beethoven Not Mozart chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
To all of you, this story was being told in the Pillow's PoV. Yes... The fluffy thing that sits at the head of your bed. The caramel colored girl was Esme. The other one was obviously Bella The pillow was jealous that it wasn't getting any action. Just having to watch him undress. Just clearing up any confusion. I totally love it XD!
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
i am so confused but i love it
| Goldeneyes'1640 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
You write so brilliantly, your words are sophisticated and cool, i felt bad for esme though XD cool short :)