|Reviews for Toonbound An Earthbound Fanmake|
| cartuneslover17 chapter 3 . 10/9/2010
I loved that episode with the giant asparagus! It had some Toiletnator in it! :D
Wow, nice that you added the Eds. Ed is such a sweetie! :)
| DragonKazooie89 chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
Except for a spelling mistake here and there, not bad. Also, I feel "boned" should have been "screwed" to keep with the Teen rating.
As for future suggestions, how about some Pokemon being some of the enemies?
| cartuneslover17 chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
Cartman, you ***hole! Your crackwhore mom hurt one of Hanna-Barbara's greatest cartoon characters! D":
Well, Wally may not be that smart, but we know we can always count on him, and our future rests in his hands. ;)
| John SJ Toongamer chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Really nice start, I did one two years ago and I have yet to remake it.
| DragonKazooie89 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Not a bad start but it would have been a good idea to change at least the location(s) in the story a bit as well as some of the enemies. Makes the story a feel a little bit more creative.
| cartuneslover17 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow, you're REALLY good at making Cartman look like an ***hole...a bigger one even! Yay, Brian! He's like the only one besides Meg that I like in Family Guy! Wally's cute here! I'd sure like to imagine him more in cutie jammies! :D Nice story so far!