|Reviews for The Chronicles of John|
| Leeksy chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Hey thanks for the review. Really appreciate it. Yeah I copied that battle because when I read it in the manga I got so inspired to write my own Pokèmon story. But yes, I will update very soon. Putting alot of work into this actually and I don't want to publish it if I don't feel comfortable with it.
| Hotrod198 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
A good start I must say but there was something important i noticed. You copied the battle in the chapter from the Pokemon Special manga when Red vs Blue. However, it was well written as well. update soon if u can