Reviews for The Adoption Rewrite
Aldwyntor chapter 3 . 5/29/2013
omg love this!plz update soon!3
Zaphyre-lover of reading chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
Love both versions and want to see more of each of them!
I'm a little weird I know!
Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
update soooooooon!
Rae37 chapter 3 . 2/4/2012
I don't are if you started over at least your continuing the story idea _ THANK YOU SO MUCH!
nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 12/25/2011
An allusion to Lord of the Rings!

Will Hyaku call them various forms of Father?

Happy Holidays!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
I like it! **
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
Noncomment chapter 2 . 11/30/2010
Interesting story, please update soon. .
GiantPrinting chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I like it so far, update soon please :D
Beautiful Dragon Princess chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Write MORE! I want to know what happenes next!
Namine chapter 2 . 10/16/2010
I like your character :) I really want to see where this story leads me. I look forward to your next post. :)
fanoftheworld chapter 2 . 10/15/2010
it's pretty interesting, but if you could add in more explanations about the kids' abilities because the ending confused me
Rae37 chapter 2 . 10/15/2010
Update, update! Please _
fanoftheworld chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
it has been a really long time, I'm glad you're not dead. Anyways, I don't really want you to take the dragon out, but if you want to, I guess you can. It is your story after all.