|Reviews for Concrete Angel|
| Rienna Hawkes chapter 4 . 1/28
This was very nice. Such tender moments. Tearing the bread in half was a nice touch-a great little detail for both the characters. You write their marriage so well and make me remember why I was so invested in their story when I was a teenager. Other girls were reading Sweet Valley High-I'm so glad I was reading this instead, and you've captured everything I love about it. Cheers.
| Fleur24 chapter 4 . 12/18/2010
I absolutely loved this chapter!
I also love how he told her about his beloved mother!
| Fleur24 chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
Well done! That was really sweet at the end!
| Fleur24 chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
This chapter was really sweet! Seeing a glimpse into his life as a child!
| Baroness Emma chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
How utterly lovely. . . all song-inspired fics should be like this.
Really very well done.
| Baroness Emma chapter 3 . 12/9/2010
| Baroness Emma chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
Ah, at last a review!
Well, I must say this is interesting, and heartrending and lovely all at once. I do love Boy!Percy stories. . .
On we go!
| Baroness Emma chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Hey Belfast! This is not a review, sadly, :( but I promise I will review soon. However, you have your Private Messaging turned off, and I cannot reply to your reviews or PM's. I WANT to, but I cannot. Please turn you PM back on, so we can talk.
Again, I promise to leave some real reviews soon. (_)
| Clio1792 chapter 4 . 10/7/2010
Great, moving, finish.
What are you thinking Percy's mom died of? This is one of those questions that I concede is entirely up for grabs, but I'd be curious about your take...
Meanwhile, this was fabulous, although I don't know the song...
Thanks for writing it,
| Clio1792 chapter 3 . 10/7/2010
And this is wonderful...romantic...the shared piece of bread at the close a particularly moving touch.
I really like the way you write the League's characters-their interaction with each other, with Percy, with Marguerite-and the way you write Marguerite is just flawless...
| Clio1792 chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
Oh how heartbreaking...poor Johanna...
This is great...I love the way you are bouncing back and forth in time...
| Clio1792 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Wonderful, excellently written chapter-and is the girl, perhaps Cerebral Palsied? This was often mistaken for mental retardation in the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries?
Just guessing-but this is a wonderful story and the conversation between the League members, and Percy's lordly call for silence that begins it is simply magnificent.
| Belle of Books chapter 4 . 10/7/2010
Oh my word! This was absolutely beautiful. I loved it. You captured the essence of the characters wonderfully. Please write more pieces just like this one! I loved the way you captured Percy's feelings about his mother and the adoration he felt towards her. I loved the scene between Percy and Marguerite in the rain. It was delicate and melancholy and delightful to read. I could see it in my mind. Thank you for this.