|Reviews for Age Lines|
| ulyferal chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Gee, I'm not sure about the cigarette addition. A pilot has to be in top condition to fly and smoking inhibits the ability to handle high G's though age will do that as well. But how old are they? Except for that little complaint, you write very well with few errors. Nice story, are you going on further with it?