|Reviews for Streak of Red|
| rowan-greenleaf chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I liked this a lot. It was very sweet! I like the way he talks to her, as if he doesn't like her, but there's still a gentleness there that he wouldn't afford her if he didn't. Bah, I know what I mean. :P
| MemoriesFade chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
I've never read something in second person in the DG realm, so this was new and interesting.
It was very sweet.
| MadameCissy chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
There is something innocent about snow. I liked it.
"What are you doing here, Weasley?"
She turns around and faces you. You expect her to be shocked - but she is not. Snowflakes fall on her and she has never looked more beautiful.
"Sitting, Malfoy. Can't you see?"
Its just so typical for these two.
| hot chocolate mess chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
That is very cute. I like how Draco secretly liked Ginny.
| Written4you chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
This is too cute and far too romantic than most things I read but I like it none the less :)
You have a way with exposing emotions from a character even when they wish against it.
I assume this is your fav pairing and I believe you write them well
P.S. I LOVE SNOW!
| Dazzled-Midnight-Melody chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
This was beautiful, I loved the phrase: "All the familiar features of the town have disappeared, hidden under the lumps and bumps of the coverlet." I thought that was a simply splendid bit of writing, the descriptive detail created a far more vivid picture in my head than some of the other stories I've read have. I do wonder though, what she was doing in the snow other than waiting for Draco... Great Job!
| R.G.B.The.Duckie chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
So normally I'm not a fan of this pairing, but I have a thing for rain (and snow) and I really enjoyed this. I think the dialogue between them was quite realistic. A loved the last couple of lines, I thought that was really romantic! Great job, I really liked it!
| Ninja Potter chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Sorry it took me so long to read it but it was perfect! Great job and I liked how it was narrated.
| Morghen chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
This was nice. I think the description painted a nice picture and it really made me miss winter. I liked the interaction between the two even though some of the dialogue felt a bit awkward. The end was perfect and the whole kissing in the snow was great.
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
I really liked the way you used the prompt, and I must admit, kudos to you and Mew. I couldn't actually find anything to get "Grrr" about. /sigh
The only thing I can really pick at is that I thought some of the sentences sounded a bit forced - as if they were just there as a filler. So the flow was a bit awkward for me.
However, I did enjoy it and found the take of "kissing in the rain" rather interesting.