Reviews for Just a Dive
FallenAngel218 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
creepy! Nice job!
flootzavut chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Very, very creepy. Why the hell am I reading this at 10pm? I think it's a compliment that I couldn't help but keep reading, though!
kunoichi chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
loved it, creepy but good story.
ghostleon chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Very giod story really fits in with the book it references(The Shining). It has a very creepy atmosphere to it to. great job
Tiva-McAbby4Life chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Wow! This was SO freaking yet REALLY awesome! :D loved it!
tiva kissing in a tree chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Spooky but I love these kinds of stories. Good job
camry72 chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Scary Creepy. You know what? I going to finish reading this story when the sun is out. I'm freaked out. Going to bed soon (if I can).

Never mind. Read it all. After I turned on the TV and the houses lights. Still gives me the chills. Creepy.
Dixie Dewdrop chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Creepy, creepy, creepy...
O.o chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
woah...That was a mind blowing little flicket!
Anonymous person chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Augh, I should know better than to read anything labeled horror before I go to sleep! Congrats, this is the first ghost story to scare me in a while!
iwantpie chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Dude. I'm thinking of staying up longer just so I don't have to go to bed right after reading this. LOL Very creepy and very well written. Well done!
diana teo chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Ooooh,I'm regretting reading this story now,just before bedtime...

Are you sure you're not Mr King slumming it in NCIS fanficland? This was super creepy,and incredibly well prose and characters,and freaked out ,I'M freaked out! Brrr...
DeathOfSanity chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
VERY Steven King. Nice!
Belker chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
So eerie! I loved it! Very well written.
WOW chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
super creepy! i got chills! awesome!
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