|Reviews for Young Dudes|
| iShattered Oblivion chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
I love this! I am from Texas, and I think you nailed the accent. Though, most words are hardly understandable when spoken... : ] It's cute. Axel must be from the stixs or something. Not many people have the accent unless they are from a very un-developed part of the state :P
| Dustymoon chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Really nice end :'D! You ever notice how many stories DON'T mention condoms? xD; I was actually thinking about that the other day. But, anyway, great update :'D!
Side Note Sorry for the whole "dying off" thing xD; I've just been busy with school so timing is weird XD; I hope you're well :]!
| Dustymoon chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
Very nice chapter :'D! *off to read the next*
| Vegx chapter 5 . 11/18/2010
MY GOD WHY DO U HAVE FEW REVIEWS!
i really loved ur story it deserves more attention this is soo unfair D;!
anyways hehehe XD
I loveed the way u writed this :)
| socrazyimsane chapter 5 . 11/11/2010
funny story, i loved it!
| Allaynna chapter 5 . 11/10/2010
Aw, I'm rather sad that it's over, and I couldn't review this chapter at first - stupid site kept screwing up. Anyway, a great end to the story. I hope you'll write more AxR fics in teh future
| Sora-sama91 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
I could have helped with the portuguese its my first lang. lol born & raised in Brazil
| Anna chapter 5 . 11/6/2010
I liked your story.
I'm just reviewing it because I'm portuguese, and the online dictionary wasn't a big help.
When you what to say:
I want you, in Portuguese we say: Quero-te
I want to make you scream: Quero fazer-te gritar
Come for me: Vem-te para mim.
| xDelfin chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
Awesomesauce! Loved it through and through ;] Don't worry about the lemon. You pulled it off as great as Axel did Roxas' shirt! LOL(?) XD Srsly. T'was sexy. I didn't know it would end so soon xO Was kinda hoping for some more Zemyx and SoRiku x] Even tho they were all OOC, they were very enjoyable to read Good job!
| sana-chan9 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
why is this over? ;A;
i'm geniunely sad DDD:
that was amazing!
| Vanilla-Envelope chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
Another great one. Just a piece of advice, depending on how long Axel's lived wherever it is they live, his accent is just a bit too thick and exaggerated. I'm not Texan, but i'm from Tennessee, and the accents are about the same in my personal opinion. I think there should be just a bit less Ya'll and Ain't, for future reference. From most of it was pretty spot-on.
| Vanilla-Envelope chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Oh my god, you have no idea just how much i love this so far.
I don't recall ever reading two chapters of something and being attached,
Keep up the great work3
| RoseRiku chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
Definitely a great little story. That lemon made ME blush. Hahaha. I also love how I went through all the work to go look up the translations on Google, then you had them listed at the end of the chapter. I suck. XD
Awesome job. (:
| khkrazy chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
awww cute! XDD
| Mochi chapter 2 . 11/2/2010
just finished reading the chapter, now i know what you tried to say. xD
The right translation is : É, na maior parte do tempo. E eu também te acho bonito.
hope i helped :)