Reviews for Young Dudes
iShattered Oblivion chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
I love this! I am from Texas, and I think you nailed the accent. Though, most words are hardly understandable when spoken... : ] It's cute. Axel must be from the stixs or something. Not many people have the accent unless they are from a very un-developed part of the state :P
Dustymoon chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Really nice end :'D! You ever notice how many stories DON'T mention condoms? xD; I was actually thinking about that the other day. But, anyway, great update :'D!

Side Note~ Sorry for the whole "dying off" thing xD; I've just been busy with school so timing is weird XD; I hope you're well :]!
Dustymoon chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
Very nice chapter :'D! *off to read the next*
Vegx chapter 5 . 11/18/2010

i really loved ur story it deserves more attention this is soo unfair D;!

anyways hehehe XD

I loveed the way u writed this :)
socrazyimsane chapter 5 . 11/11/2010
funny story, i loved it!
Allaynna chapter 5 . 11/10/2010
Aw, I'm rather sad that it's over, and I couldn't review this chapter at first - stupid site kept screwing up. Anyway, a great end to the story. I hope you'll write more AxR fics in teh future
Sora-sama91 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
I could have helped with the portuguese its my first lang. lol born & raised in Brazil
Anna chapter 5 . 11/6/2010
I liked your story.

I'm just reviewing it because I'm portuguese, and the online dictionary wasn't a big help.

When you what to say:

I want you, in Portuguese we say: Quero-te

I want to make you scream: Quero fazer-te gritar

Come for me: Vem-te para mim.
xDelfin chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
Awesomesauce! Loved it through and through ;] Don't worry about the lemon. You pulled it off as great as Axel did Roxas' shirt! LOL(?) XD Srsly. T'was sexy. I didn't know it would end so soon xO Was kinda hoping for some more Zemyx and SoRiku x] Even tho they were all OOC, they were very enjoyable to read Good job!


sana-chan9 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010

why is this over? ;A;

i'm geniunely sad DDD:

that was amazing!
Vanilla-Envelope chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
Another great one. Just a piece of advice, depending on how long Axel's lived wherever it is they live, his accent is just a bit too thick and exaggerated. I'm not Texan, but i'm from Tennessee, and the accents are about the same in my personal opinion. I think there should be just a bit less Ya'll and Ain't, for future reference. From most of it was pretty spot-on.
Vanilla-Envelope chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Oh my god, you have no idea just how much i love this so far.

I don't recall ever reading two chapters of something and being attached,


Keep up the great work3
RoseRiku chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
Definitely a great little story. That lemon made ME blush. Hahaha. I also love how I went through all the work to go look up the translations on Google, then you had them listed at the end of the chapter. I suck. XD

Awesome job. (:

xox Rose
valdia chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
awww cute! XDD
Mochi chapter 2 . 11/2/2010
just finished reading the chapter, now i know what you tried to say. xD

The right translation is : É, na maior parte do tempo. E eu também te acho bonito.

hope i helped :)
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