|Reviews for Thoughts and Actions|
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
ahah thats funny.
| J.DRAST chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
Hello. Liked the story! Loved all the details! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
| ImmortalWar chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
I like Edward like that..No longer virginal and uptight...thanks for writing it. lol
| Edwardlover4vr chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
Prudeward is gone! *fist pumps* :DD
| folm chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
That was really great and well-written! Plus, jealous Edward really lets his guard down. Satisfied me in ways BD didn't! Thanks for sharing!
| SugarVenom chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
Very cute and hot! Nice combo.
| wattle1 chapter 2 . 6/11/2011
Nice job, I loved your story.
| SegaParks 101 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Just amazing...i am speechless or rather typeless (if that makes sense)
| sarahlouise80 chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
wow that was story.
| littlestar300 chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Really great Lemon and really sweet as well.
| WoodLily chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
:-) :-) :-)
| WoodLily chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
This is great! I loved the lustful thoughts of the other boys in their class. You build up to the bedroom scene really well. And the sex is just... wow. It's hard enough for me to write lemons in English as my first language, but your prose is just seamless.
I'm with you, by the way. I don't buy Edward's unparamounted sexual restraint in canon. He inhabits the body of a seventeen year old, and he's in love. Of course he wants sex with his girlfriend.
I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue now.
| crazykidwithbook chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
this is a good story well done
| MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
This waz anazizng
i loved it but then again i lov all ur storiez
i probably sound like a broken record ur most likely getting sick of me lol
i loved this
so freaking hot!
Ur an amazing writer gurl
i cnt wait to read more of ur stufff! XD
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Oh yes, you did very well with this. Sensual, delicate, a little ackward, like it should have been. But, what id the timeline? when does it exactly happen?