Reviews for Yakimochi hen
Aimii0 chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
This is really good, can't wait to read more. XD
Aimii0 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Seems intense.
lilpurplebird chapter 10 . 5/24/2011
...this...

...I can't explain the feelings I'm feeling over this. All I know is that it was perfect. I can actually see this as an actual chapter in the anime. There was enough where this chapter could be split into three parts, and where connections to other episodes can be made.

I loved it. It may have been slightly predictable, but it's actually nice to see how Mion could be a victim of Hinamizawa Syndrome, because as far as I know, she has never killed anyone.

The only complaint is at how you had gotten to these murders rather quickly, but other than that, it was great.
Sergeant Daniel chapter 10 . 5/16/2011
Wow. This was just, wow. I love it. Love it, love it, love it. It was so good, it will be cool if this be comes an episode. Anyway keep up the good work:D
fukuji mihoko chapter 10 . 4/22/2011
I thought the transition between Mion's normal, friendly nature and her sudden desire to murder everybody was a bit... hasty?

The scene w/ Mion cleaning the knives with Shion was awesome- there was so much tension, but I assumed Mion wouldn't actually kill Shion- and then she did, very quickly, and... I don't know... it surprised me. I thought Mion's hate would build up a little more before it finally overflowed, I guess XD

Satoko's torture was written well XD It actually made me wince :D

Oh, and I saw that 'mion i've always loved you' from keiichi a mile away XD

It would have been nicer if there was a twist and keiichi actually liked rena, or keiichi /did/ love mion but now he's disgusted with her, or some such thing... I think. Then again, this is only my personal opinion XD

Maybe you could count Keiichi's 'I love you' down to Mion's general insanity & hallucinations by this point XDD

Oh, and when you had Rena with the billhook, I was totally expecting something like what happened to Keiichan in the 1st arc to ahppen to mion, where she assumes her friends are now trying to kill her XDD i guess this is irrelevant though XDD
King of Werewolves chapter 10 . 1/4/2011
Creepy yet beautiful...nice job!
UchihaFanForever chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
Awesome ending! KEIMION forever!
BleedingMaggots chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
It would be awesome if they have this in the anime.

No not awesome, epic.
Crimso chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
And so it ends. I thought this whole fic was really great. However, I think you should have been more descriptive with Rena's death. THat's my only issue. Otherwise, good job!

HH
Kirino chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
Nicely done rendition. Good work. :)
merrygould chapter 10 . 12/27/2010
The way everything fit into place... How do you do it? I honestly have nothing to say, again...

If you do want constructive criticism, however... Here it is? O .o

I do think you rushed it a little, especially when Mion began murdering. Somehow, I felt as though you could have taken your time to describe it a bit more.

Other then that, the ending was a little upsetting, but good nonetheless. Honestly, every time I saw an alert in my inbox, I'd click the link right away. This was definitely worth my time. :D

LL
Crimso chapter 9 . 12/25/2010
This. Is. Amazing. Great job, I mean it, great job. I like how you put detail into the torture. Well, not because I find it entertaining to watch/read graphically gory anime/manga/books/whatever (Well, I obviously like Higurashi though :P) but because it made the story and the writing that much better. It made Mion look that much more psychotic and insane. Now, I wonder what she's going to do with Rena. I bet it will be a hundred times worse. Keep up the good work! Merry Christmas, by the way.

HH
YinYangWhiteTiger chapter 9 . 12/25/2010
TTTT Poor Rika she tried and failed but this chapter was just perfect! I love it and thank you! God... it's just so perfect XD!
Cherrylin chapter 9 . 12/25/2010
...3

I really love this chapter. It was so... So Higurashi! I like your writing style; it's clean, detailed and yet not hard to read. I would however prefer you put a lot more detail into the gory parts, taking into consideration you want a M rating. Describe even more how the blood flows, describe with colors, senses, feelings, smells.

Keep it up!
UchihaFanForever chapter 9 . 12/24/2010
Thank you for the Christmas present! haha
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