|Reviews for broken little girl|
| Rowling's Daughter chapter 1 . 5/29
This is wonderful, your plot is nice. However, there are both grammatical mistakes and typos in here, and I recommend you fix them up. For example, it is meant to be "depressed eyes", not "depressant eyes."
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I like it, I like it very much. It's absolutly excellent.