Reviews for The Inspired
Murazor chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Though the idea of turning a children's game into a horror in which innocents are turned into unwilling puppets pulled by the strings controlled by uncaring gods is hardly new at this point, it is still nice to find a good one.

Also, the fact that it is well written helps.
Winter-Grown-Lily chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I was surprised that no one bothered to review this. It's such a heart wrenching story, especially the part when the blocker lemming cried when he...exploded...*bursts into tears*

The flow of the story was fantastic, and I loved how you managed to pack so much in one story. The only iffy part was when the ends of the various lemmings. I think you used 'some' too much, so it became a little repetitive after a while.

However, this is a good one-shot :) And the ending made me oh-so happy.

Winter-Grown-Lily