Just as I supposed, Jasper's offspring and William's mate. That would be sad to kill her. At least he could visit her in the spirit world. Lousy cancellation if you ask me, js.

I'm wondering if Williams mate will be the little girl, Victoria, that they have helped and could maybe be Jasper's offspring?

Oh yeah Stephanie is named after Stephan not SM

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What do I think? I think Edward is an idiot if he's seen the vision of himself (from Henry's nightmare/vision) as a sneering, cold, red eyed monster bent on annihilating his entire family and thinks he's above it and able to go it alone. But, that is how the plot thickens. Maybe he is secretly counting on that memory, the part where the family takes them on and are all still alive but are going to spare him. Explaining his continued request for Bella to always & forever bring him back from wherever he may go with Aros's memories. Lord that was a long winded reply.
Thanks for writing this awesome read.

Do we know who made Aro? Maybe Aro, thus Edward doesn't remember and that is who the ancient Vampire is?

So, I thought in the original Twilight that the couple that came across the Native Quiluete tribe that the female vampire was killed by the 3rd wife, if not she could be the mysterious ancient vampire..?

Why does William have venom and Stephanie doesn't? (wow, I am slow...I just got the reference Stephanie Meyers)

Awe, the fall of Edward is going to be horrific and tragic if Henry's nightmare is true. Oh say it ain't so!. But what to do for a plot if not so?

Evades, this ancient one makes ya wonder if the nightmare Henry had wasn't a premonition after all.
This does sound like a whole other league of evil... I don't want Edward to become evil incarnate but it is exciting to read

Mystery mystery, can't wait!

I absolutely loved this story.

I am on the edge of being able to communicate - this story is sublime. I'm to the point of grunting and pointing and just muttering - good. . . good.

This story is so intriguing. Your command of the English language makes it such a joy to read, notwithstanding you're torturing our Edward. Loved, loved, loved Esme's POV last chapter! And, love all the new folks. . . all the new vamps with unusual names and little Ellie and William and Stefani personalities just continue to captivate! So, I guess it gets gritty now, and right at Christmas! (At least you let Bella "have" Edward to hold her over, for who knows how long!)

I feel like Jodie Foster's character in Contact. . . no words, there are no words. As a believer, the Scripture references are an incredible addition to this story. And, so far, with one exception, completely contextual. (There is no mention of a watcher in the verses of Genesis. A watcher is not mentioned in the Bible until the Daniel reference, who came down to monitor King Nebuchadnezzar's punishment for arrogance. But, I believe your anachronistic reference was to enhance the story, not an attempt to add or take away from Scripture.) I have always received immense enjoyment of the Twilight Series stories because it is a telling, with a different context, of the most ancient of storylines - the battle between good and evil, redemption from our original, sinful natures, and the incredible restoring nature of love and forgiveness. So enjoying this story and I too, have embraced Hope now.