|Reviews for Las Noches High|
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/5/2016
Very TL;DR because I'm on mobile and I don't know how much I'm writing and I'm sorry.
All of this. I love absolutely all of this; this entire story. You have an amazing way of writing; it's in a manner that seems almost vague, but not as much in the sense of lacking substance but of... choice brevity? You leave it, mostly, to the audience to read behind the lines of what it means when character A stares expressionlessly as character B sweeps out of the room with a smile, the character voices are all so distinct and I absolutely love how individual the character relations are because it's REAL - Nel and Ichigo (can I just mention the one early scene where Nel laughs and tells him that she isn't the one he should be looking at [in that way]? Because it is such love), Di Roy and Ichigo, Shawlong and Ichigo, Aaroniero. Your writing is almost dreamlike, quiet, with the italicised 'flashbacks' and it's not vivid in that the audience can picture absolutely everything from the specks on the concrete to the colour of the sky in perfect detail but more like the characters ARE the focus, the only sharp points in a greying setting that slowly becomes more familiar the more Ichigo goes there, and... When a character leaves and you see the character left behind and their expression and reaction, where they're sagging tiredly against the wall or they're smirking in victory or glaring. There are so many things I could say, it's ridiculous, and this isn't even really including characterisation. When you say a character smiles, or narrows their eyes or grits their teeth, you can honestly see it.
Here, I love basically all the Arrancar so much - Nel, with her exuberance and innocence beautiful as she is and with no filter (thanks Pesche) who is just new but at the same time so reassuring and 'a mix of everyone Ichigo knows.' You can feel it really well. And Grimmjow's DISCIPLINE throughout the fic, from managing his club to telling Ichigo to keep studying with his birthday present I mean study incentive sword (until later on, but the reveal of how long Grimmjow had been... waiting for Ichigo... just FITS). I almost wish that their swords can come into more frequent appearance, and Tensa Zangetsu as a CHARACTER - so ironically passed over, which I think is amazing considering how important he is in canon, an element of Ichigo's life that in this AU Ichigo never really considered he could be - was incredible. 'Hollow Ichigo' (I don't think this is really an appropriate thing to still be calling him, but) just works, mocking Ichigo about his celibacy and taunting him to let him be in control so they can finally let loose.
Di Roy is amazing. Even after reading everything, I still remember on the day of the ... tournament?... when he sniffed Ichigo with his heightened tension and everything and only commented that he shouldn't have bothered putting anything nice on, and it just stuck out to me. Lulu seemed a little off to me for a moment because HMM, kind nurse person, Hatoful Boyfriend flashbacks?, but I can't believe how much I've missed him in the most recent chapters - HALIBEL and her Fraccion, that first time with Ichigo sitting at the edge of the pool and her saving him from slamming his head against the floor. Such understated character interactions. I love them.
GIN NEEDS HIS OWN PARAGRAPH. Woefully short, but... he's incredible.
You took a trope that is very easy to butcher with tasteless mischaracterisation on almost every part and basically PWP, then you made it into a multichapter story that shows so many sides to the characters we already know especially in a setting like THIS, terrifyingly shut-in 'Utopia' that is Las Noches it works it works it works so well, and you give them all lives with Ichigo balancing regular school on top of cram school and his extracurricular club and work. Maybe I'm being biased, because I adore Ichigo and maybe I'd have a much more differing opinion had I hated him and how much this story is centred around him, but this story is in its own way so much more than just the fact that Ichigo gives off heat pheromones.
The chapters leading up to his first time were absolutely not wasted. I feel as if it isn't even the sex that makes this fic what it is and it really isn't, no matter how much it's basically a culmination in their relationship that just sighs "FINALLY" just like the wait until Ichigo and Grimmjow finally got together did - you took this setting, these characters, and while there maybe are a few plot points I'd love revisiting (Aizen? Possibly) and a few characters I'd love to see more;
Thank you for writing this. I don't know if you're still inspired with this story, but I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I adore what you have done and maybe this fanfic will see another new chapter. Thank you again.
| TsukiyomiKuchiki chapter 37 . 4/24/2015
Amazing story. I throughly enjoy it, every single one. The plot was good, you connected the story making it all flow. Just awesome!
| Niji Hitomi Kabra chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
So many questions I've been holding off asking but I KNEW it was Renji that gave him trouble at Shinou. I knew it!
| SocialReject212 chapter 36 . 6/5/2014
Finally got to read this chapter! Love it and all the interactions. Can't wait to see where this story goes from here :)
| Fave Follow Accnt chapter 6 . 3/18/2014
I would just like to inform you that this story is wonderful.
AND THE INTEGRATION OF LITTLE CANON ELEMENTS AND THE BLEACH GAMES WAS BRILLIANT. GOD BLESS YOU.
| TrustyFoxy chapter 36 . 3/8/2014
I love it so far. :)
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 36 . 3/8/2014
so long as u do another good update like this i'm cool!
| CelestialMoon chapter 35 . 11/24/2013
I loved this fic!
| cary99 chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
| cary99 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
| HikaruWinter chapter 35 . 10/22/2013
AH! Cheza-sama is running away! Fast, my crazed inner selves of doom! Arm yourselves!
Inner1: You got it, boss *picks up chainsaw*
Inner2: Muffin? *raises giant maze*
Inner3: I can smell blood in the air *unseathes katana*
Inner4: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'll fill your underwear with itching powder! Mwahahahaha! *shakes scythe*
Inner5: To eviscerate or to not eviscerate, therein my plight *flicks knife*
Inner6: ...isn't she supposed to be the angel or something? And why's the 'devil' a mercifull prankster? *waves around riffle*
Inner7: Don't ask me. -i'm not crazy enough to understad. 2. Thoughts *uncaps atom laser*
Inner2: Mmmm, brownie?
Inner6: That answers that.
Inner1: Her evil laughter is shaking my groove. Make her stop.
Inner3: How exactly is itching powder to the unmentionables mercifull?
Inner6: Oh, believe me. I'm the real pranster here, and I've got easy access to all kinds of pranking genious. Itching powder to the nether regions is childs play.
Inner5: I suddenly fear for my life... how amusing. Oh, well, let it be bloody!
Inner7: I can't decide if she's a sadistic bitch or a masochistic whore. 6, do illuminate me.
Inner2: CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES!
Inner6: What's with 2's food rampage, anyway?
Inner7: You're seriously asking that to ME?
Hmmm, this is getting slightly out of hand. I better rein in my madness before it spills over... too much.
ALLInners: AWWW! BORING!
... yeah. Reining them in RIGHT now. Awesome chapter, btw! Although, I have to admit, I'm way more happy for the update than usual, so I may be slightly biased as I'm really high on endorphins right now. And sugar. But I'm always high on sugar. But seriously, I saw the update and I was like-
Inner1: And there was much rejoicing.
...like that, yes. Well done, my inner selves of madness and chaos! Specially you, 1. You're really efficient.
Inner1: It was nothing, boss *bows*
Oh, well. You may begin the hunt.
*all inners perk up and start hunting down Cheza-sama*
You mustn't run when predators are on your trail. Nor fangirls. Fangirls -like me- are just nasty. And sudden movements just spur us on. Just look at my inners. They're usually in the darkest recceses of my mind. But you ran. And they came to the forefront with an unsatiable need to follow you, tie you up and make you write under penalty of toe-tickles. So, yeah. Do not tempt the reviewers, for they shall jump at any chance given *nods sagely* I should know... *trembles*
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 35 . 10/4/2013
Three months?! D: nuuuuu!
| Jazzy-Monster-5955 chapter 34 . 9/1/2013
your doing great!
hope theres more
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/31/2013
I really love this story! It's one of the best! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| animelover56348 chapter 34 . 7/3/2013
This stories awesome! hope you update again soon!