Reviews for Benevolence
jmac1220 chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
It's nice to see an unrequited Katara story. As for your writting, Yes! You do write it better than the creators.
YinYangSisters chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Build a cloning machine and then duplicate yourself bilions of times, please.

If there are more people like you in the world, I can 100% garuntee that it wouldn't have turned out as horribly as it has.

Indescirbably, astonishingly and flawless superb oneshot.

If you ever stop writing, I can also garuntee that you will be hunted down and tortured for it.

I sound so violent, don't I? :D


- Yin
Chocolate drop chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
beautiful. but i was hoping katara would've fought back like when he said she was with Aang, she could've said he was with Mae.


:( Alas. Mike and Bryke just crushed all that is good.

"Mike and Bryan own; I just write better than them"

and lol, TRUFAX. :D
greeneyedgirl105 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Depressing, enlightening, very fun to read :)
AnnaAza chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Man, this was so sad! "sniff" Poor Zuko, and especially poor Katara!
luvnote4u chapter 1 . 10/9/2010

this was sad! but i still liked it. nice job.