Reviews for Chess
mlw217 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
This is awesome! Seriously love the chess metaphor. Great job.
ShadowKira chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
This was short but you got across what you needed to in the small amount of words provided, I liked it. :)
iamalittleLeStrange chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
t was very intresting, i could definitly be inspired by this.
UglyTruth chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Now this is a really interesting idea. Love how you associated the characters with chess pieces. Great description too, not overdone and the feel of this piece is just right. Thanks for sharing.
cracked-out chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I liked this a lot. The whole "taking down Division is a chess game" metaphor worked nicely. I recced this to a friend of mine, actually.
tipsyapple chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Your stories are great! I hope you keep writing them!
WarwomanWay chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I liked this
Kay8abc chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I loved it. I really liked the chess aspect of it.

Caliente chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
This story is really cute! I love the way you use chess as an allegory for the characters- it's really clever and fun.

Can't wait to see what you come up with in the future. :) Cheers!

Ria-Dancer Girl chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
That was so cool! The chess metaphor was amazing! Such great writing too. I loved it!
xXPlayedByLifeXx chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Really enjoyed this beginning. The metapher is good too, I used to play chess and was pretty good at it and I think that you've perfectly connected the game with the show and the characters. Can't wait for more!
Good Graces chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Hey good job! Wonderful character analysis. :) Keep up the good work! Oh, and by the way (Alex is my favorite character). LOl Her story is just so much more refreshing to me because the show is showing her origins. You know? lol

Anyway, thanks again for the read.


Good Graces
Cricket99 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
aw thank you guys - I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Artemis' hunters chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
I like it, Hell I love it, you hit the nail on the head. i'm suprised your new at this. keep up the good work, i'll be looking for more from you. ~Cynthia
bigger infinities chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
I really liked it. 'Cause really, that's all they are - pawns in a very dangerous game of chess. Wonderfully done.