|Reviews for Ascension|
| blazelight790 chapter 2 . 10/13/2015
This chapter here made me cry too hard. Even after reading it years later.
I just have too many feelings for Brambleclaw ok? Brambleclaw feels make me cry
| Angelsong chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
That was really cool. You desribed the sensations perfectly. By the way, not to be a critic, but Dovewing's name is Dovewing not Doveflight. Sorry, I'm a warriors geek, so I can't stand stuff like that. Anyway, thanks for wrighting such awsome storys!
| Primitive Soup chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
I love that father-son moment(sorta) and mentor-apprentice thingy with Firestar... Great contrast.
| Velvet Masquerade chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
Aww how sweet! Hmm maybe you could do Cinderheart ceremony... I mean she is like the calmest cat eva! So calm and sweet...lol
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
FOR THE LOVE PF STARCLAN THAT WAS SUCH A WONDEFULL AND BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER!
You nailed every single detail down perfectly! I t brought tears to my eyes! Well done!
| Swanstream chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
i just realized that this said, "complete." NO! oh well. ur a good author
| Swanstream chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
OH! I LOVE IT! i love mosskit! so cute! "That was a cheeky question" lol, so adorable! keep updating other one shots!
| Go Cats 27 chapter 3 . 10/9/2010
WOW really good and incredibly well written. KEEP WRITING! maybe do Ashfoot/star?