Reviews for Take This Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Time for my umpteenth rereading! Oh, and thanks for using the right expression “I’ve said my piece” in this chapter. I get why some would think it was “peace,” but it triggers my Grammatical Pedantry Syndrome, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bullshit. Like I said, they could have found a way to help Bella without exposing the vampire secret. I'm not blaming Alice for keeping silence, if that Vulturi crap is what she saw, but I do blame Carlisle, because Alice would have seen a better outcome if in that alternative future Carlisle hadn't recklessly run in without covering his glittering skin somehow. I mean, come on! A simple blanket thrown over his head would have sufficed, or a quickly purchased or stolen bike helmet. Not to mention the fact that Alice would have had her vision soon after Carlisle and cia left Phil in the bar, since it was their drcision to break his hand what put in motion these events. She could have warned them at once, so they could avoid the new outcome they had created. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's ridiculous that Carlisle would let this happen. Alice no doubt saw it, and Carlisle and cia must be right outside in a tinted glass car, and they do nothing? Because it's sunny? Are you telling me four smart vampires can't find a way to walk the distance from a car to a doorstep in the sunshine without revealing what they are? Even if gloves and hoods didn't exist, couldn't they have sent someone else over, like Alice sent Mike? Send the police, or hire someone like Carslisle wanted to do. At least interrupt Phil with a phone call, anything. You obviously only allowed this because you wanted it in the plot, but good as the drama might be it only makes the characters ridiculous. At the very least Bella shouldn't forgive Carlisle so easily for letting this happen when he could have easily prevented it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story, I’ve been telling my husband about certain chapters and funny bits I’m so glad Phil got what he deserved and I loved Bella and Jacob’s friendship- I love how they banter through the wedding It’s pretty difficult to find non cannon pairings that meet all my requirements but this story lived up to my expectations |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not the least bit offended by the happenings in this chapter. I'd call it just desserts! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. I would fabourite this story again, if only i could. |
![]() ![]() Que fic incrívil, nunca admirei tanto uma história, tudo, o modo que os personagens se relacionam e cada convrsa lá atrás é importante pra que desenvolvesse esse vinculo entre eles, perfeito. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic. I love all the interactions between Bella and various Cullens, especially Carlisle, Edward, and Jasper. They’re so sweet and caring. I could (and have) reread this many times. Thank you for putting this amazing fic out there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just enjoyed another reread of one of my absolute favourite stories. I can't decide if I love your Edward or your Jacob the best... I'm thinking both! |
![]() ![]() Sincerely? It was amazing! I savored it slowly, taking advantage of the wonderful words that this chapter gave me. |
![]() ![]() I’m not understanding why Phil isn’t being reported. Bella withholds Charlie’s abusiveness from her therapist so that she won’t have to go back to her mother so why not report Phil so that she doesn’t have to go back. I know she’s embarrassed but everyone who matters to Bella already knows anyway. And I don’t buy Charlie’s excuse that he tried everything. A cop with a lot of connections who knows his own daughter is being sexually assaulted by her step father would stop at nothing to end that piece of shit. He should have done something more than nothing. And Billy is a lost cause. He refuses to step down off of his pedestal to admit that he didn’t really know his best friend like he thought he did. If he cared at all, he would have seen the signs all along or at the very least, would let her go now to be with people who actually care about her instead of continuing to advocate on Charlie’s behalf. Emmett was spot on what he told Billy at the meeting. And last is Carlisle, he’s still keeping things from Bella. Why hasn’t he told Bella about mates yet. I wouldn’t trust him either for the simple fact that all of the information that Carlisle owes to Bella has been coming from Edward instead. Ridiculous of Carlisle to expect Bella to make any well informed decisions when he doesn’t keep her informed at all. |
![]() ![]() Read the whole thing in a few days! I generally could not put it down which speaks to good plot lines and exciting writing. My complaints are that I could not fully buy into the story as I had a hard time seeing Carlisle being cool with having sex with a minor. I managed to read the story with a sort of cognitive dissonance. Additionally, I felt the whole Charlie beating up his daughter for years thing was swept under the rug. Yes, he did his therapy, but he’s still an abuser! Other than those two things, I really did enjoy the story. You created a fully fleshed out new plot including tons of characters which really speaks to how well you know the Twilight universe. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() God this Bella has to be the most annoying useless idiotic fucking brain dead retard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot express how happy this book has made me time and time again. Thank you thank you thank you for writing such a beautiful masterpiece. |