Reviews for I've Fallen for You
Shay-chan33 chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
I fell in love with your story X3
Mespirt chapter 14 . 5/11/2013
This story is really good please continue
Princess harvest chapter 14 . 12/29/2012
More please :D.
Hikari-chama chapter 14 . 10/7/2012
Yoyoyoyo... and Update! BEST. DAY. EVER. I love this chapter!
The Yoshinator chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
Poor Gil. You need to have more drive to get the girl, Gil. Please update quickly.
LegendarypkmnNyunyu chapter 14 . 10/2/2012
Love your story!
Tip for you!
Write some Hikari's past!
She never mention anything about it.
And I'm sure her onee-chan know something about her past.
Update in ASAP!
Keep writing and gambatte!
UnwrittenMemory chapter 14 . 10/1/2012
Poor Gilly. D:
gazcool9269 chapter 13 . 7/6/2012
I Absolutley love your stories! Will chihaya confess? And I wanna see hikari saying yes, because an event happened between gill and hikari making hikari think that there is no hope between them and then, she eventually does end up falling for chihaya's kindness and warmth and sincerity! But then, her heart still loves gill as well, while gill sits back and just watches hikari and chihaya fall for one another, but why does he let this happen? Because he simply wishes for hikari to be happy whether she is showing her happiness to some one else or not. But gill slowly let's the pain of seeing hikari with some one else get to him and when he decides to talk with her about how he feels with chihaya and hikari, words can not simply describe it... So he passionately hugs her and kisses her! But the scenario between them when he talks to hikari about her relationship, hikari should be in her room after she came home from a date at chihayas house where they were baking deserts together, and while she is in her room, she thought about how nice her relationship with chihaya is going but then, she curiously wonders how nice it would be to be with gill, then she feels her heart ache because she falling for chihaya, yet she can't let go of gill, then speak of the devil she suddenly hears a knock on her bedroom door, and at a time like this, who else would it be? Gill! (no don't think dirty, not like that, the reason why I thought it be best like this is because why else would GILL of all people knock on HER door unless something REALLY bad was happening?) and as she got up from her bed she saw gill, who looked like he was on the verge of crying, because he was very pale, had a deep red blush the looked as though it burned( and it did for gill). and she asks gill what was wrong, and he just asks if he can come in and sit with hikari so they can talk, and she gestures him to sit on the edge of her bed while of course it seemed very serious so she shut the door for privacy, and as she sits at the other end of her bed gill stares at Blankley yet she sees the hidden pain in his expression and he still has the trail of red blush across his cheeks and nose. He then let's out a loud sigh an starts to begin talking the about the issue he has been carrying. "hikari" he says, "I don't know why but when I look at you my heart starts flutter, when i see you with chihaya, my body gets really hot and I get jealous... And I just get so mad!" gills blush spreads to a deeper red and stings even more but stood across his nose and cheeks in the same place, "ugh!" he moaned, "I'm so stupid getting in the way saying this crap!" he looks over at hikari who has the same tone of red and the same place of blush across her face and place a hand on gill's shoulder who can no longer bare to stare at hikari in the eyes, "Gill" she whispered, "look at me" even though he was hesitant to look he managed to stare at her sheepishly, "I-" was all that managed to excape his lips before hikari had placed her finger on his lips shaking her head signaling "no, it's my turn to talk" her eyes were filled with care, warmth, and sincerity. The same warmth hikari has showed him all these hikari says " gill, I've liked you before i knew did, and I cant help but realize I'm slowly falling for chihaya, but i know in my heart I've fallen for you for a long time, and chihaya is always on my mind but, you are the one that interrupts my thoughts of chihaya, so I need you to know I love gill and I'm beginning to love chihaya" those were the words that pained gill to hear, yet they brought him bitter sweet happiness knowing hikari loved him as well, yet what about chihaya? There was only one thing to do about that, and it was to steal hikari away from chihaya. "hikari.." gill managed to whisper as he pinned hikari down on her bed and began to steal one more kiss from her soft lips. After for what seemed like years, gill pulled away to catch his breath and hikari whispered "no gill... It's not fair to chihaya, the only person I should be doing with this IS chihaya!" gills icy blue eyes stared down at hikari who was beneath him. Gill shot her a determined emotion hikari has never seen before, he looked as though he was gesturing "I'll have my way with you and nothing will stop me" once he grasped that hikari understood the look he shot at her, he once again stole another kiss from her lips, though it wasn't like the kiss he stole before it was a REAL kiss, that had gestured "I want you" but as gill's body came closer, he closed the gap between him and hikari, hikaris eyes furrowed together and struggled to get away but gill was to strong, the heat between them made her strength deteriateeventually she had no choice as though she unknowingly gave in and kissed gill FORCED himself off of hikari (I did forced in caps to show he really wanted her then and there! But rembered how she said it wasn't fair) he grabbed her wrists and pulled her closely to him where their foreheads met and gill in a very soft yet serious tone "hikari, I love you too much to let you go without a fighting chance, so trust me if you really want me too I will steal you away!" and with that he gave her one last long final kiss on her lips and walked out of her room, leaving hikari there speechless, hot, and out of breath.
The Yoshinator chapter 13 . 5/20/2012
This is such a good story. Update, please.
Just a Girl chapter 13 . 3/25/2012
Okay hello. I have to say this is one of the greatest stories! It is so very adorable and I love it. Please please please update this soon. I've been waiting for EVER. I would be so sad if you abandoned this. :'( I miss your updates on all your stories. Big fan here! :D
UnwrittenMemory chapter 13 . 2/18/2012
Please update soon. :(
morningdew123 chapter 13 . 8/12/2011
I wonder what Gill is gonna get her... :) Can't wait to find out!
morningdew123 chapter 4 . 8/11/2011
This story is very good! I keep wondering how old they are though...XD
morningdew123 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
Aw, this is soo cute! I hope you keep going. How old are they?
Tammyannthinanut chapter 10 . 8/9/2011
awwwww! so cute about the cow! i just love gill

maya would explode an easy bake oven by putiing something in it that didnt belong... like shoes or kittens...
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