|Reviews for The Long Journey|
| jtscores chapter 17 . 8/31
Good story, I enjoyed it. It could have been more, as you said, but every story has it's flaws, none are perfect. That said, you did very well with this story, in my opinion. Truthfully, I would have preferred to read this story to its conclusion, but you at least gave valid points as to why you weren't writing it out. I will thank you for at least having the consideration to tell us how the story plays out, I was grateful for that as well. I understand that this is an old post, but I still wish you well with your life as it seems that you have (or had) your hands full. Thanks for writing this, I really, truthfully enjoyed all of it. Farewell!
| olives chapter 5 . 7/22
its murtagh not murgath.
| troutman30 chapter 11 . 7/18
Great interaction between Naruto and his "ghosts".
| Atheist god chapter 5 . 3/2
You keep mispelling murtagh
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/8
alright, Naruto annoying/scaring the ever loving hell out of Arya is my new favorite thing. In general.
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 10 . 12/31/2016
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 4 . 12/30/2016
| jtcr chapter 17 . 12/4/2016
You're going to make me cry man. All of what could have been. Thank you for writing this
| Hercules8 chapter 3 . 8/11/2016
Pretty cool story! :)
| the unsung antihero chapter 17 . 7/18/2016
If I had the time... I would probably ask if I could adopt the story and test my hand on it, however seeing as I DON'T have the time, what with my 3rd shift job and my time consuming videogame addiction, I would be hard pressed to find any time to sit down and write.
| MattKennedy chapter 17 . 6/21/2016
While I'm sad that you won't be continuing the story, I'm very happy that you posted this summary of what you were planning, so we weren't just left completely hanging. :)
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/10/2016
Well, at least you didn't left us on a cliff-hanger for all eternity. It would had been a pretty epic finale though. AH, the possibilities...
OH, what the hell! Have fun with your life bro and good luck with that other stuff you're working on!
*''Those Who Inherit The Will Of Fire" Track and the end titles role* XD
| jordanlink7856 chapter 4 . 6/2/2016
What happened to the line breaks?
| SneakyDevil chapter 17 . 5/29/2016
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/22/2016
I really love this story. Great character development and human questions asked. I am sad to see this end, but I felt that it at least ended (what was written) on a good note. Also thanks for saying what would happen so I am not left wondering about this story. Thanks for writing this.