|Reviews for Taking Notes|
| Bree chapter 1 . 2/16
Still one of my fave snow/light oneshots after, what a year and half(?), after I discovered your wonderful fics. I keep re-reading this, hah.
However like I said in my last review/comment. Waaay too much Hope, definitely not enough snow and lightning ;) I would've preferred it if it was some voyeuristic, perverted peeping tom neighbor, who was just walking by and ended up staring through the window and pleasuring themselves (or not this part). Granted they wouldn't know who snow or lightning's names, but they could've heard each moan the other's names.
Anyway, end of my slightly weird-sounding snow/light fangirl rant. I dearly hope you update '100 seconds' soon.
| Bree chapter 1 . 1/17
I've read this so many times, I've lost count on the exact number! It's more than 10 times :D
Though I always skip over the parts mentioning a perverted peeping Hope. Please write more snow/light oneshots and continue with '100 Seconds' 3
| Bree chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
My most fave snow/light one-shot thus far. I agree with the other reviewer, no perverted Hope is always preferred :P
| Moons-Chan chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Cuddling? Never in my wildest imagination! And I really like how you threw Hope into the midst!
| Gerkyhen chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Loved it! I loved the sexiness of the lemon in contrast to Hope's innocence. Yay!
| Katherine chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Nothing bad to say. Just hoping there's a follow-up.
Personally, I'd like to see a little more dominance on Snow's side but I imagine that's probs not your style or you would've done it already )
| G-AnakinRPG chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Great job! :D I wasn't aware that this was on .
| Aeris1172 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
FUCKING OMG, YOU'RE THE ONE WHO WROTE THIS?
You're like a god of the ffxii kink meme. I luh you.
| Artemis Noir chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I hate this pairing, but I like this story. Poor Hope LOL!
| Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Holy crappers! THAT WAS SMEXXXY AND HOTTT! WOWZA! *fans self* LOL, Hope cracked me up, that little Peeping Tom. :) It was smutty and very well written smuttyness at that. Thanks for satisfying my Snow X lightning fix for the day!
| brainfear chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Really hot! I love how both of them would switch their dominance during the sex! I like the perspective. It's interesting to see the act through Hope's eyes. Well done!
| stellaclaire chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
omg! that was hot. i love it. lightning and snow are the best couple in ff13, way better than him and serah. i also like hope and light too but i like them better. anyway, hope you still make more hot smutty fics. keep up the good work! :D
| Supermel Returns chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Oh, my. *fans self*
Before I elaborate, I need to say this much: this would have been Pulitzer-worthy if Hope wasn't included. :3
With that aside, bravo! Like every other fic you've written, this one is a slam dunk. Even with it being narrated by someone other than Lightning or Snow, the heat was unbearable! I especially enjoyed Hope's naivety, and the line "They didn't mention this part in class". I highly enjoyed it. :D I was also rather amused that Light smacked Snow for giving her a hickey; although, one would think it wouldn't be a big deal since she's normally the only one to see her own breasts.
Let's see... what else... I don't even know how they didn't notice that they left the door cracked open? I mean, what normal person has sex without locking the door - and with the risk of the whole house hearing? Just sayin'! Obviously Snow and Lightning don't care if people watch their ministrations. ;)
All in all, A. :)
Can't wait to see more stories!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
| Bookgirl1980 chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Nice one shot. This would have been good in a Hero's charge as it would set up Hope later on for what happened.