|Reviews for Taking Notes|
| Bree chapter 1 . 1/6
My most fave snow/light one-shot thus far. I agree with the other reviewer, no perverted Hope is always preferred :P
| Moons-Chan chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Cuddling? Never in my wildest imagination! And I really like how you threw Hope into the midst!
| Gerkyhen chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Loved it! I loved the sexiness of the lemon in contrast to Hope's innocence. Yay!
| Katherine chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Nothing bad to say. Just hoping there's a follow-up.
Personally, I'd like to see a little more dominance on Snow's side but I imagine that's probs not your style or you would've done it already )
| G-AnakinRPG chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Great job! :D I wasn't aware that this was on .
| Aeris1172 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
FUCKING OMG, YOU'RE THE ONE WHO WROTE THIS?
You're like a god of the ffxii kink meme. I luh you.
| Artemis Noir chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I hate this pairing, but I like this story. Poor Hope LOL!
| Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Holy crappers! THAT WAS SMEXXXY AND HOTTT! WOWZA! *fans self* LOL, Hope cracked me up, that little Peeping Tom. :) It was smutty and very well written smuttyness at that. Thanks for satisfying my Snow X lightning fix for the day!
| brainfear chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Really hot! I love how both of them would switch their dominance during the sex! I like the perspective. It's interesting to see the act through Hope's eyes. Well done!
| stellaclaire chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
omg! that was hot. i love it. lightning and snow are the best couple in ff13, way better than him and serah. i also like hope and light too but i like them better. anyway, hope you still make more hot smutty fics. keep up the good work! :D
| Supermel Returns chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Oh, my. *fans self*
Before I elaborate, I need to say this much: this would have been Pulitzer-worthy if Hope wasn't included. :3
With that aside, bravo! Like every other fic you've written, this one is a slam dunk. Even with it being narrated by someone other than Lightning or Snow, the heat was unbearable! I especially enjoyed Hope's naivety, and the line "They didn't mention this part in class". I highly enjoyed it. :D I was also rather amused that Light smacked Snow for giving her a hickey; although, one would think it wouldn't be a big deal since she's normally the only one to see her own breasts.
Let's see... what else... I don't even know how they didn't notice that they left the door cracked open? I mean, what normal person has sex without locking the door - and with the risk of the whole house hearing? Just sayin'! Obviously Snow and Lightning don't care if people watch their ministrations. ;)
All in all, A. :)
Can't wait to see more stories!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
| Bookgirl1980 chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Nice one shot. This would have been good in a Hero's charge as it would set up Hope later on for what happened.
| viciousmotives chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Heehee... looks like someone forgot to lock the door. Hope always gets himself into surprise! sex ed in the fic world lol. Very hot ;)