Reviews for Elements
Reviewer chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Um... Okay... This story doesn't really make any sense... First of all, are you trying to make a IN the game, like from the point of view of your character in the game? Or yourself, playing the game...? And secondly, you might want to get a beta. Lots of spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. Sorry.
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 9 . 11/1/2010
back off holiday nice chapter
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 6 . 10/21/2010
I SO WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER DO IT ALREADY XD
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
keep going this is realy good XD
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
common make a new chapter already its SOOOO GRIPING XD
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
3 more wordds and its 500
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
what joke?
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
we nearly did but we are still cautious
Matthew Stormfeather chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
this is great

snake would love this

i will comment on later ones to