Reviews for Neutral
hipster pig chapter 1 . 5/21
I love her view on bella. Not that I hate bells (I love her). great story
mscalliope chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
You portrayed my thoughts on the matter entirely! You did really good with this one shot.
eee chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Your analysis is basically exactly how I feel about those characters.
gab000 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I'm really not liking Bella. I can understand how Kim feels toward her. Bella was selfish.

Kim had some good points.

Awesome one-shot!
AFlairForSelfishSkies chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Just wow really wow you made me realize Bella really is selfish and weak etc. gosh one more disliker towards Bellal is that good? Kim has great points towards all of loved the story )
miriamne chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
this was really well done. It was interesting to get inside Kim's head and she had some very good points. Where will you take this? Maybe another bonfire where Rachael and Claire are there and some more of Kim's thoughts on them (especially with the Jake/Paul/Rachael drama)
LovelyGirthls chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I loved it! That was amazing! I love your writing styles, you are one of the few that can write so descriptively(?) and I, unfortunately, am not one of them.

But I loved it and I will read more of your stories and review them now too :P