Thank you for this story. I enjoyed reading it so much! It was so different and so excellent. I enjoyed your writing style and the Omni POV. I also liked how the timeline revealed itself in the story. The back and forth kept me interested and kept me wondering what was happening. Thank you so much!

This was a beautiful story.

Oh it’s over I love this story and your writing
Thank you so much for a great read

Normally skip stories if they're written in third person, but I loved this one. Thank you.

Beautiful story and I absolutely love your writing style and the rhythm of it. Thank you for sharing!

Beautiful story. Thank you :)

I love this. I liked how you wrote their day by day. Bella's crearly complicated, and Edward's described as simple but I think he's complicated too.
Thank you for writing and sharing this cool story with us.

Almost didn't make it past the first couple of chapters, but very glad I did.
Thank you.

Loved the story. Thank you for the trip. It was fun.

I loved this! Not sure how I missed reading this!

this story is written like poetry i love it

That was so beautiful. Few words yet so intense. It blew me away.

you're very talented imo. Thanks for sharing!:)

They finally both got on the same page! Great story, thanks for sharing!

Loved Arthur and Dorothy's story.