thanks ... just reread ur fic and enjoyed it immensley ... it feels like ages ago that i initially read ur fic and with ur futuretake i felt happy to reread it and then read ur update ... u have a gr8 writing style ... makes it so easy to feel and identify with ur characters
xoxo

Loved Edwards review and all the inside comments that only bella would get. Can't wait to see Edwards face when he opens the door to bella! So lovely of Alice to check on bella and make them both realise they love each other. Great chapter x

I do feel so bad for Edward but he did bring this upon himself. Hope bella forgives Him soon. Great chapter x

I would have been cross if she wasn't angry with Edward for not telling her. Great chapter x

Ooh the secret is out! I wonder how bella is going to take the news of why Edward was there I the first place. Great chapter x

Edward obviously feels very deeply for bella if he has take her home to meet his parents and is considering leaving Chicago. I am a bit worried that aro is trying to call Edwards ruined cell phone.

Oh Edward avoidance is never good! Rosalie is such a bitch and the worst type of guests especially as your first guests! Great chapter x

Oh oh is Edward going to reveal everything or lie. So sweet that Edward couldn't stay away any longer. Great chapter x

Oh dear! Edward is in trouble now if bella looks to see what column he writes for the magazine. Edward seemed very jealous that jake had stayed for dinner. Great chapter x

So sad that Edward is leaving! I hope he won't be gone for long. Charlie seems suspicious as expected. Great chapter x

What an enjoyably sweet story! I loved this Bella, fearless and determined and who could resist Mr. Travelsward...all hot and sexy. He was a fool for not admitting his true career to her but it all worked out well in the end! ;)

Loving this so far. This chapter was beautifully written...I really feel like I'm there with her. Great job.

lovely outtake
thanks for writing for katalina

Thanks - this brought back memories! I never expected to read more about the White Swan Lodge! ;)

that edward...unf!