Reviews for The White Swan Lodge
tbens chapter 23 . 10/28/2012
thanks ... just reread ur fic and enjoyed it immensley ... it feels like ages ago that i initially read ur fic and with ur futuretake i felt happy to reread it and then read ur update ... u have a gr8 writing style ... makes it so easy to feel and identify with ur characters
Julia-S77 chapter 17 . 10/28/2012
Loved Edwards review and all the inside comments that only bella would get. Can't wait to see Edwards face when he opens the door to bella! So lovely of Alice to check on bella and make them both realise they love each other. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 16 . 10/28/2012
I do feel so bad for Edward but he did bring this upon himself. Hope bella forgives Him soon. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 15 . 10/28/2012
I would have been cross if she wasn't angry with Edward for not telling her. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 14 . 10/28/2012
Ooh the secret is out! I wonder how bella is going to take the news of why Edward was there I the first place. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 13 . 10/28/2012
Edward obviously feels very deeply for bella if he has take her home to meet his parents and is considering leaving Chicago. I am a bit worried that aro is trying to call Edwards ruined cell phone.
Julia-S77 chapter 12 . 10/28/2012
Oh Edward avoidance is never good! Rosalie is such a bitch and the worst type of guests especially as your first guests! Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 11 . 10/28/2012
Oh oh is Edward going to reveal everything or lie. So sweet that Edward couldn't stay away any longer. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 10 . 10/28/2012
Oh dear! Edward is in trouble now if bella looks to see what column he writes for the magazine. Edward seemed very jealous that jake had stayed for dinner. Great chapter x
Julia-S77 chapter 9 . 10/28/2012
So sad that Edward is leaving! I hope he won't be gone for long. Charlie seems suspicious as expected. Great chapter x
Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
What an enjoyably sweet story! I loved this Bella, fearless and determined and who could resist Mr. Travelsward...all hot and sexy. He was a fool for not admitting his true career to her but it all worked out well in the end! ;)
LilLamb24 chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
Loving this so far. This chapter was beautifully written...I really feel like I'm there with her. Great job.
chartwilightmom chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
lovely outtake
thanks for writing for katalina
vermonstermom chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
Thanks - this brought back memories! I never expected to read more about the White Swan Lodge! ;)
amelia chapter 23 . 10/26/2012
that edward...unf!
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