This has been on my TBR list for a long while now. Finally making it to the top. This is only the second chapter and I already love it. And, not because of BxE, it's because of your WSL. Having lived in a city my whole life, I dream of living on a lake someday. Manmade or natural, don't care . . . just want to hear the lapping of those waves. This place sounds incredible. Can't wait to read more.

Wow, did he just? Hmmm . . .

Rec'd this story in the Fic Dive over at ADF. Thanks for sharing it!

This feels very forced. I can understand the anger, but this just seems too contrived.

Can I ask the point of blonde Bella? If you wanted a blonde, why not use the plethora in canon?

She is such a hypocrite. Because he wrote a nice rewiev so she will speak to him? So if he wrote a bad one, but was hones, that wouldn't be ok? She would never speak to him again?

Is Edward unable to write a good review? It seems that if he could write a good review, Bella would not hate him

He must already be thinking about not leaving and being honest with her

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Cute story!

awesome thank you

why would he now go ahead with the review and prove her right?
He had already decided to ditch it
he'll confuse the hell out of her
He wants to giver her a glowing review and send business her way?
the madness of men - " i'l fix it" by doing eh

great prove her right and let her mind work overtime on falsehoods by leaving

Loved the story and all the ones you have written. Anything new coming up?

cute story- thanks