Reviews for The Good Left Undone
mattywilkss chapter 16 . 8/3
no. nar shadaa is so densely populated that the rasenshuriken would have caused mass destruction. death on a huge scale.
mattywilkss chapter 6 . 8/3
so they can hear the conversation perfectly but need binoculars to see them? i call bullshit.
mattywilkss chapter 5 . 8/3
the kawarimi doesnt work like that. its a very quickly dispelled illusion. and why the fuck is naruto smoking? there are a lot of points in this story where you try to make naruto into what you think is as cool as possible, rather than using the canon character, so in fact aside from the abilities ITS NOT REALLY NARUTO.
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 48 . 7/20
Good story hope you add more
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 47 . 7/20
Great chapter
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 46 . 7/19
Pleasent surprise
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 45 . 7/19
They don't want to make Naruto mad enough to lose it
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 44 . 7/12
Nice jitsu
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 43 . 7/11
Never a dull moment
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 42 . 7/10
Big gamble
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 41 . 7/10
Well Naruto's finally popular
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 40 . 7/10
Well played indeed
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 39 . 7/8
Worst threat for a guy
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 38 . 7/7
Love the couples
Naruko2001 chapter 8 . 6/22
Is the Kyuubi no Kitsune still inside of Naruto?
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