Reviews for The Good Left Undone |
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MojoBoingo chapter 3 . 4/13/2019 Small note: The Emperor's first name is Sheev. Sheev Palpatine. |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/6/2019 Great Chapter as it believably ended the Arc, showed Narutos Power and answered the Kyuubi Question. Still a great Story and hope it continues like this. |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/6/2019 Yes i like how you make it seem as if Naruto is stronger than good ol‘ Ani (the Amulet Sith wouldn‘t have just backed down from that Option bcs the „revived“ Jedi said so, i assume whilst i haven‘t read that Comic myself) but i feel like Naruto shouldn’t have been knocked out. He dogded Blasters on Felucia and it wasn‘t as if he wasn‘t on High Alert the whole Time so theres that for the Excuse of him still needing to adjust and all that. Also even if the Blaster Bolt was shot from an Elite of the 501., that doesn‘t make it faster ir deadlier. Also i feel like the Impact of the Blaster was too much, Canon Naruto even „only“ until 2010 Happenings tanked more. Anyways still a great Story and i understand why you did it. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/6/2019 And again since you wrote this in 2010 (started to write this) u can‘t know some Things simply. Theres an upgraded Kurama Chakra Mode where he gave his Chakra willingly and then theres the SixPathsChakraMode and then hes Indras Reincarnation and so on... wouldve loved to see some if that; but can live without it seeing as all of that A) Would make him be GOD practically (even though he still should be faster than Light) and how it doesn’t change so much in this Universe Anyways again Great Read so far! |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/5/2019 So since you have Naruto have KCM shouldn‘t he be able to sense the evil Intentions of the Clone? Does he have to activate it? Also considering this is the , i, personally, would need a Resolve and whats up with Kurama now... so far great Story tho just wanted to give you the due Credit! |
Jayce243 chapter 48 . 3/23/2019 Its a great read and i enjoyed it so far just hope there is going to be another chapter |
UzumakiKazuma chapter 48 . 2/3/2019 Next chapter, yeah right lol this is like game of thrones, ya have wait a year or so for a new season but unlike game of thrones, it's like 10x worse. Was great reading it no matter how long the wait will be, still one of the best. Would be better to find out what happens but it's all up to you the author and no one else. Kind of hope it won't be another year wait to make it an even 4, like I said it's up to you. Either way thanks for writing this and leaving it up for us to still read. -Still a fan to this Day UzumakiKazuma :) |
Eltari chapter 34 . 1/24/2019 Maybe he can’t summon because he is too far away, he didn’t have trouble summoning before because everyone was on the same planet but maybe if he used sage mode, kurama’s chakra, and his own chakra at the same time he might be able to get a toad about the size of gamakichi when he was small enough to ride on naruto’s head. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 47 . 1/15/2019 ..pretty surr you meant to say he prostrated himself before Jabba, not castrated. two very different things, heh. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 45 . 1/15/2019 ...The Force Unleashed was a video game, dude. Force Awakens was decent, but nothing special. been putting off watching Last Jedi since i've heard almost nothing but bad things about it. Rogue One was pretty damn good though. at least as good as any of the Original Trilogy, in my opinion. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 33 . 1/14/2019 and here you have yoda being a complete and utter idiot. forget compassion, morals or ethics. the fact of the matter is, they don't have the numbers to pull this shit with Ayaala. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 32 . 1/13/2019 first, this Kai Hondurras is a useless hypocrite. second, why would he accept Naruto's challenge? he has absolutely nothing to prove to naruto himself. only to his fellow jedi. having them fight is idiotic. maybe his instincts as a bothan acting up? that entire race is trash. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 14 . 1/12/2019 ...Barriss absolutely did deserve to die, and lived far too long. the fact that she wasn't punished for actually committing the crimes she framed Ashoka for just shows how corrupt and incompetent even the jedi of the time were. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 10 . 1/12/2019 ...you just called Jayne Carrick, jaden, dude. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 5 . 1/12/2019 as for Barris, good riddance to bad trash. i'm an Ashoka fan, in case you couldn't tell, heh. don't honestly care either way about the padawans. |