Half way through chapter 9 and I gotta say this whole thing was BS. I know you had to do it to set up for the rest of what you wanted to do but a bunch of people spoiling for a fight and ready for an ambush... get ambushed and give up immediately...

Let's not even talk about an experienced ninja, who's ready and expecting trouble getting shot by as clumsy of a weapon as a blaster. Bright red and noisy AF...

I'm posting a quick review mid read to comment on the fact that while I understand your intent upon leaving Vader alive for the purpose of plot after the fight in chapter 11. I think you should have handled it differently.

Potential alternative 1: Naruto blasts him out a window only for him to get picked up by some storm troopers in hover cart who rapidly flee. I don't care how convoluted his escape would have to be almost anything would have felt more in character than Naruto just stopping to say "Sorry, but like I said I don't have time." ...to finish off a down and defenseless Vader.

Your Naruto has displayed an uncanny disregard for previous enemy life. In the same vein, he has also frequently displayed the ability to kill people in less time then it takes to finish a sentence like; "Sorry, but like I said I don't have time."

A particular bad plot choice that I think could have been handled better. I can look past it but the moment I was triggered to stop reading for a bit and post this review was when Vader was remembering the scene and that particular quote came up again in this chapter. I'll certainly come back to this soon because I love this stuff but now it's become a little more of a guilty pleasure kind of read and recommendation.

Overall, I really am enjoying the narrative of this story and even appreciate Vader not dying the first time him and Naruto meet.

Thanks for writing,
Toebang

It's a great story so far, and written very well.

Though I think you made Naruto a bit too weak. Even if you discount everything after chapter 500, there are hints and examples of Naruto and other ninja performing feats far beyond what you wrote.

Naruto's team traversed from his village to suns in a few days, but it was nonstop. A few hundred kilometers should be easy in a couple hours, though you display that. A 12 year old Naruto popped up hundreds of clones, so why would an adult Naruto have trouble doing the same with several times more Chakra? Chakra from clones return to their creator, along with memories, so he should be recovered after that. Ninja move FAR faster than any Jedi ever would; at least any beyond chunin - as displayed by Kakashi.

It's not bad, but there are several little details that are a bit off.
Or course, these could all be purposeful.

He released his sage mode to conserve Chakra?
I thought it was stated that sage mode helps recover Chakra faster?

Its great that people like you use the name Jarvis every now and then! Amazing! My name is in there! And I'm a smuggler! So far, this story amuses me and makes my day! Keep the good work!

Hey there, can we expect another chapter sometime or have you stopped this?

Please update soon. This is the best Naruto/Star Wars story I know of!

The description was so good... How is THIS the story it was written for? You turned your war hero into some uninteresting, contrived little idiot who takes forever to realize his situation, and even after doing so starts revealing info in unknown territory. Htf is this guy any different than canon? You also pretend there wouldn't be a language barrier, that a ninja wouldn't be more paranoid towards a stranger(He's gone through this once with Haku), insinuated that the force has enough to do with chakra that she could feel it, and etc. I'm really disappointed :/

Not to badmouth this story, it's awesome, but the situation with Sasuke is very cliche (Sasuke get's captured by the evil mastermind and brainwashed to become a tool for him to further his plans); it's used in almost every Story I've read when Naruto and Sasuke are transported into a different world while still Enemies... I wished you would've chosen a different approach (like Sasuke being around but independent from any faction, but a pain in the ass for the Empire and anyone who cross him... I would've loved to see Palpatine having one tantrum after another about this mysterious guy he can't catch, but it seems that won't happen...). I'm waiting until I read more of this Story to see what you've planned to do with Sasuke before I make my final decision if I like it or not :)

Woooooow i'v never liked Sasuke but DAMN the emotions... I now hope he finds some happiness

Ohhhh solo adorablely fluffy & I vote for more fluffyness and pipping hot lemons.
&I love the connection between 3 warrior cultures and Naruto's society with blood oaths... Quite interesting.

This chapter was EPIC!
Boy that Sith Lord must have had a hell of a great time with the 9tailed fox. "YOU HUMANS ARE SO STUPID" LMAO

The whole Vader situation is plan retarded. Naruto could have quickly killed him but he just left him lying there? Wtf?! And he calls himself a shinobi? What shinobi in their right mind would not finish off a defenseless enemy? And if your excuse is that Naruto was short on time and had to quickly get Celeste out of there, then first, he shouldn't have spent time wallowing in self-pity; and second, he could have just thrown a wind-sharpened kunai into Vader's throat and thereby quickly killing him. I just know that leaving Vader alive is going to bite Naruto and co. in their collective behind.

And I am done. Sorry but tens of thousands of years of space travel on a galactic scale with a population in the quadrillions and yet... Only now with Naruto they they find out someone can use Chakra? That they can use the Force as it were in that way? That tens of thousands of Jedi, Sith and other Force Sensitives never found out such things?

Nope. That is such a gigantic author hand wave to force a plot down a certain route it just shatters my enjoyment.

If you had Naruto using seals in a very risky procedure to give her chakra? That would be different, but you don't. After all chakra is a secondary circulatory system. You could see it quite clearly with the Byakugan, with the files that shows it in the manga and show.

More so using the gates have exact locations that are known, just like organs but instead they act as natural blocks to limit self destruction. You are outright saying No One in all of what I pointed above found chakra? No, sorry but that is so far out there it is just too much. Good luck with the story.

(You forget no matter how strong a person is he is not infallible, a good blaster shot or lightsabre strike could probably kill Naruto if he isn't careful.)

You realize by that time Naruto can tank hits that blasts apart large buildings at the very least right? Really the only thing that might be worrying is a lightsaber because of how hax they are with some things but blasters? We see Force users blocking such with their hands, and they for sure can't take a direct hit of that sort without death.

People always either nerf Naruto or make him to OP. I guess nailing his actual stats down is difficult.