Reviews for The Good Left Undone
Dericof Diname chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Thanks for the update.

It was a fun chapter.

By the way, i was thinking, if Chakra is considerate like inner Force and the Sage mode is reached when the ninja harvest ambient chakra, then, If Naruto manage to master the force he will be able to use the Sage mode more efficiently?
Hades45 chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
That was great. I'm looking forward to the romance.
hordac85 chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
great work
eclipseX chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Wicked chapter
Trey of the rebellion chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
very good darth
Jimbobob5536 chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Very nice chapter.

The end was the best.
HolyKnight5 chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Hoo boy...and the second disciple of Naruto only needs one more, to truly be the seeds of the first Shinobi Order...the Leaf...

If you think it, i can see the Order created for Naruto, it will remind of the "Assassin's Creed" their style of acting would resemble their creeds and tenets...also it would be both a mockery of the Sith's use and abuse of Fear...
Vandenbz chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Aayla definitely did something Naruto would do, he's becoming a bad influence already. Nice of them to save that little girl, I'm looking forward to Naruto and Aayla meeting the crew of the Uhumele. That scene of Naruto's clones destroying expensive antiques was hilarious! Please update your great stories soon!
chaosfire999 chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
You are an evil person! having things happen but still leaving us on a cliffhanger of such proportions. What will the ship's reaction to the Jedi be? How will the father-daughter reunion go? How will Naruto's very... disturbing comments be taken by the crew("well within my abilities", "created [...] clones")?

Most importantly, what happens next in the (galaxy relevant) plot?

D: you nice person for updating D:

Thanks for writing.
The Engulfing Silence chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
this isn't bad at all, I kind of like this story.
volrath77 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
Kway Teow! Char kway teow...stir-fried with eggs, shrimp paste, cockles, veges, beansprouts, chili...Damn it! Now I'm hungry...

Uhh heh heh heh...

Going back to the story, keep 'em coming!
Capito Celcior chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
Docking bat? Not bay?

Good story overall. Like it. Gonna want to read more of it.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2010
I'm sorry, I have to say this. Naruto does not know what those guns/blasters are, or how they could be dangerous with no tag or blades attached, yet he tells Aayla that she was about to be gunned down? Big mistake. I think you should change that phrasing. I know Naruto has seen what the small blasters could do, and he just witnessed the death of Barriss by the large ones, so he does know what damage they can do. But not the word "gunned".
mako234 chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
Please continue this interesting story!
lakeyer chapter 5 . 11/1/2010
like the story think that you should update sooner plz
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