I'm love the series. Could you do one with Naruto & Mara Jade?

I haven't benged read a fiction in some time but this has had me hooked badly. I can't wait for more

Ignoring the flamers. This story really has been another fun-filled roller-coaster ride of ups and downs. Shame it is not continuing any time for all your hard work up to this pointment. All the best in whatever you do from now on.

Ah yes, the "are you an angel" line always works on star wars girls

i like to come back to this story evey once in a while to see if its been update, i realy enjoyed it i hope you update again

You don't know how sage mode works do you?
It doesn't tax chakra it does the opposite,it makes you rejuvenate faster if you can keep the balance between all three types of energies

Naruto is complete an utter shit the anime is garbage asf why do people like it so much. Fucking everyone sucks on narutos dick the shitty show is garbage same with all the follow ups of the anime garbage and if you find it good you have brain damage or you have a disability or maybe you were just dropped one too many time on your head as a child

Nvm you did make naruto weak as shit, like he really got hit by a single blaster bolt while on guard

Damn i thought you made naruto weak asf for a second there

If Sasuke somehow ends up in this universe too and become a Sith then becomes an ally or sth with the power of friendship and talk no jutsu I would have to ask you to die.

I know this story catches fire from other critics and shit posters, but to be honest the plot was a great idea and I can say that I rather enjoyed this book throughly. There is no denying grammatical errors, however even with error the points and emotions you wish to convey to the reader are felt and well done. I'm sad to see this story left off on such a cliffhanger. I will say this will probably go down as one of my favorite and top Naruto/Star Wars fics; for the writers creative use and quality blend of adding elements of Naruto to a Star Wars universe, all while keeping a sense of realism and character perspective. Nicely done and I would hope this book receives a another chapter or a proper conclusion to this epic tale.

i hope you continue this story and update again

Now I remembered why I dropped this story. It was amazing until you brought the worst character in all of naruto into the equation. Get sasugay the fuck out of here.

Jesus Christo i read some other reviews and DAMN this really turns into a hot fuckin mess, so many wrong turna and decisions accumulating into a clusterfuck of a story

This shii feels so forced and unnatural and im only on chapter 2, doesnt bode well for the rest of this story.