i stopped reading this story as soon as it was revealed that Aayla had Chakra coils, and thus everyone/most people regardless of what species they're from has them. Because there is no doubt that Palpatine and a lot of other major characters will practically become shinobi now, one way or another. I don't know whether Naruto is in a completely different dimension or if the Elemental Nations are on a planet that is merely beyond the outer-rim territories in uncharted space, but ether way, having chakra available to the People in the Star Wars universe was a bad idea, not to mention that it's only being discovered and used after Naruto shows up, thousands of years after the Force has been harnessed is laughable.

so are you still writing this story or?

Loved this story a lot. Best Naruto/Star Wars crossover I've read yet. I liked the little indications that Shinobi are in fact the precursor to a lot of the warrior ideals in the Star Wars universe showing that Naruto and Sasuke weren't just thrown through space but time as well. The relationship between Naruto and Aayla is well written considering she was a jedi with zero experience in such things. At first when Aayla was forced to leave the order I was angry considering not long before that there was the conversation where Celeste basically explained that it made little to no sense to suppress their natural emotions, but I felt a lot better when Yoda personally returned her lightsaber and acknowledged that while changing to allow such things might be better it would take time. I know it's super unlikely you'll ever see this or return to this story but I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I have enjoyed reading it. I'm following/favoriting this story on the minuscule chance that you may eventually return.

May the Force be with you.
-Genesis09

I wish Celeste could speak to Yoda of the jedi of old and how their emotions empowered them and how the current order with their way of suppressing their emotions has limited and blinded them to the people around them. After all how can you empathize with people if you cannot feel what they feel? Experience what they do as they do? The Jedi Order is so cut off in their temple that they don’t truly understand the very people they’re supposed to protect. Anyway that’s just my thoughts on the old subject. Though you’ll probably never see this message considering it appears this story and account are dead.

Good to know you admitted to your stupidity, at least. Starting on more stories when you can't even finish one.

Wow, you already forgot that her last bounty was ten million credits! It's somehow down to a hundred thousand.

Not only can you not spell, or even use commas, but you're also a fucking retard! Wow!

No wonder you abandoned this. Good fucking riddance to your garbage, I say.

Learn how to spell.

YOU'RE - YOU ARE - NOT YOUR.

Done with this. Why the hell is Naruto exposing his entire life story to people he just met. You’re so fucking lazy, this is just bad writing. And judging by the other reviews, a lot of people seem to agree

Really? One shot and naruto's down?

language barrier?

If this was clone wars it would be god tier. But the movies are not my fav to read about. Amazing story up to here but not for me

*sigh* don't you love it when instead of actually developing the story in a natural way you have the main character just spout his entire life story to people he's only known for a few days at most. I see that type of crap all the time, and it's just lazy.

He can make a thousand clones with blasters. He is an army but seems to forget the power of his own signature jutsu

This shit is so dumb. Naruto could’ve killed Vader a long time ago. He could’ve killed Vader in the last chapter and Sasuke and ended it there but the author had to make it convenient that they had to go again. Fuck this is so annoying. Plus the author does all this and never finishes the story in the first place. It’s just the same shit over and over again

Bruh a jonin in 6 months? Wtf. Like fr wtf