Naruto better learn how to use the force or sense it. Fuck it’s been 22 chapters and so far he hasn’t learned shit

sucks that this hasn't been updated in so long.

...you say naruto wants the shinobi to be treated as equals in this little alliance, then have him turn down the rank of general and a seat on the council. and also have him accept what is effectively a demotion for Ayala from General to major. those things aren't exactly consistent, dude.

also, given the recent past (and the EU, for that matter), if the Jedi or Shinobi willingly bind themselves to a government again, they're fucking idiots.

...why would Naruto be worried about a tank? it'd be child's play for him to take it out.

So, i take it you're disappointed by the new movies? heh. so am i, to be honest. the only one i can whole heartedly endorse is Rogue One. that was a good movies. the sequels make me appreciate the prequels more.

also, Darth Jar Jar.

i think i've read this before, but i'm still going to say it: fuck Barris Offree. seriously. hope the bitch died in agony.

i'm an Ashoka fan, in case you couldn't tell.

I love this story.

Please more chapters awesome fight awesome story

I disagree with this cop out. Yoda violated Naruto’s mind to get the information on his relationship with Ayala, he purposefully called her out and kicked her out of the Order despite the fact that her significant other is their fucking salvation, and he did this despite all the other compromises the Jedi made during the war. Yoda doesn’t get to just waltz in and say I feel bad about what I did but still stand by it. I honestly wanted Naruto to split from the idiot High Council over this. Let them come begging in a year or so when most of the remainder have been hunted down. The morons are spitting on their allies when the entire galaxy wants them dead, they can learn some fucking gratitude. I know this story hasn’t been updated in years, but it deserves the constructive criticism.

UPDATE

Clones have control chips in them and rex removed his i feel like this should be known unless u didnt watch sw rebels

Fucking nurfed the shit out of Naruto and It kind of pisses me off when you talk about him being exaused or anyone from Star Wars being faster than a Jonin the world of Naruto is ridiculously OP and George Lucas didn’t make Jedi all powerful like Shinobi are... saw some comment about Saskue being in this story and I’m going to bail, great grammar though

? What low died!? Wtf are u perchance a writer for greys anatomy or game of thrones? This story, to me, had so much potential but feels like your just coming up with stuff as u write and its throwing off the awesomeness that it was. U are a good writer believe that but I don’t like the direction you are going or how naruto has become more of a side story mixed with others instead of main focus. Good luck to you

I read this for narutos pov i dont care for all the extras. And it was cool thinking that naruto would start shinobi people but with sasuke doing the same it sucked as an idea honestly saduke on the dark side is annoying and just feels like you forced sasuke in the story so that someone could fight against naruto.

I really dont like that u brought sasuke out of literally no where and had him get cought by sith. Y bring him ? You have the whole SWU to play with.