Reviews for The Good Left Undone |
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Blazeb79 chapter 21 . 12/29/2019 No! No ! Dammit why bring anyone from narutos world. It was going so good! Theres no need to bring sasuke. Ugh |
Guest chapter 35 . 12/27/2019 I can't believe that you missed the chance to say, "Its over 9000!" When Healer Che measured Naruto's midichlorian count while he was in Sage Mode. |
Guest chapter 27 . 12/27/2019 I hope Naruto gets the Darksaber. It would be perfect for him, considering its unorthodox katana-like shape. I know he has the Uzumaki blade, but there is nothing wrong with dual-wielding ot switching around |
Guest chapter 21 . 12/26/2019 Sasuke could have fucked them all up with Chidori Nagashi. |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/26/2019 Are they fucking retarded? What kind of idiot would knowingly walk into another trap? And how did Naruto not sense them? He could have used Sage Mode to fish them out. |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/26/2019 YT-1300? The same model as the Millenium Falcon? Nice. |
WhyareUsernamesTakenAlready chapter 48 . 12/25/2019 I know I'm 3 years late, or is it 4 now? Anyway, when's the next chapter? |
BOBbyboy177336 chapter 48 . 12/13/2019 yo wtf, please update |
MysticBladeMaster chapter 48 . 12/10/2019 Wait is Vader is on Tatooine then will he find Luke? |
Net105 chapter 48 . 12/3/2019 Just finished reading this again. Please come back and continue writing, or at least come tell us why you quit! Please |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 I have never yeet'ed myself out of a fanfic faster than I had when I made it to chapter 3. There is only so much bs that a person's suspense of disbelief can take. |
RyMalice chapter 48 . 11/23/2019 So, any chance of you continuing this story? |
Xud10a chapter 3 . 11/22/2019 I like how you said you would not be weakening naruto skills whatsoever but yet you did exactly that. His WIND INFUSED kunai didn’t penetrate their armor even though they can penetrate anything then you have him say that he can’t run as fast as the Jedi. Like you are so fuckin wrong about that there is no way a Jedi can be faster than Shinobi from naruto’s world. Next, the part that made me want to stop reading, you give him chakra exhaustion so easily. He made hundreds of clones, ran a couple of kilometers and created 1 Rasengan and all of a sudden he ran out of chakra? Are you kidding me if that’s the case how then how the hell did he kill 10 S-class Shinobi. If he has that little chakra which shouldn’t be be possible since he is an uzumaki and has kuruma in him yet you have him use barely any of his chakra and make him have chakra exhaustion how far did you nerf naruto it’s absurd. You told one of your reviewers that you wouldn’t dampen naruto skills yet you did exactly that. Then you nerf Sage mode saying that would make naruto extremely tired and again how far did you make naruto weak that is so untrue he used sage mode 4 times during his fight against pain and never got tired but here you nerf it. But by reading this story and how far you nerfed his skills is truly pathetic and I won’t read this anymore. Maybe if you watch naruto again and get a true reading of his skills then I come back to it |
Xud10a chapter 12 . 11/21/2019 Lol talk about misleading your readers. I thought this was going to be about only naruto then you bring Sasuke out of nowhere. Oh hell know this story was enjoyable until you brought him. I’m dropping this story I hate when the authors mislead the readers and bring other naruto characters to the crossover led universe with no explanation |
Xud10a chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 Why are you using Japanese just stick to English for the Jutsus please |