Please update.

“She was surprised, and slightly hesitant to believe that it was a type of time and space manipulation Jutsu, capable of bending reality around someone to make the switch. Naruto had explained to her that there were other, more advanced forms of this technique, and that all were useful or deadly against opponents.”

Okay, simply untrue. The Kawarimi is a high speed movement technique that uses something like a log Henge’d into you as a distraction

Interesting start. I’m curious on where you’ll take this, as Naruto should be able to take out anyone one on one in the verse with speedblitz. If he’s facing a lot of opponents he could get incapped due to his lack of passive force shields, but the speed gap is so large it would take some powerful opponents and many of them. Unless you decide to add in some EU elements, that would definitely even the gap, though add too much EU stuff and Naruto won’t be able to keep up, even if he had Six Paths powers. Also not sure why Naruto had such a hard time with Kisame, considering Sage Mode hard counters his main ability. Looking forward to reading the rest, even if it does seem to have been abandoned

Well I was really enjoying this until sasuke showed up, I'm gonna have to stop reading here. I know I won't be able to continue this with that prick around. I hate when authors write sasuke into a crossover like this. Not saying it's a bad story, it's just not for me. Good luck with this though.

i swear to god if u dont come back and finish this story right know I will eat ur ass

great fanfic wish there were more chapters

so I just want to congratulate you for being the second person to actually bring Celeste moorne in too the story and actually use her. bravo

Still want to congraculate this fanfic for finishing on the biggest cliffhanger it was possible to have ! It takes skill to achieve something like that !
So Sasuke kills Naruto : the end

Wow
A long time not reading this fic
Still waiting ;)

I should support ;)

My problem so far is that you seem to make the force irrelevant. I do not believe that the force and chakra could be the same thing, and, as far as what I know so far, Naruto is in another dimension/universe, meaning that chakra might not exist nor work the same.

Is the capital name Canon or have you actually named a city after a type on noodle.

This particular chapter was bad.. Really bad. I think Naruto is giving away information like candies. He is a veteran shinobi not a amateur genin.

And why would Tholme have any rights to judge shinobi?

I'd rather be a shinobi with my own moral code and independent lifestyle than be a prude with a blackwhite glasses living in temple preaching about dark and light . There is much more to life than just being dark and light.

In a way shinobis enjoy much more freedom than a jedi despite being under military dictatorship.

I think there is much more parallels between the jedi order and root than Naruto thinks. While jedi does not have any bad and evil like intentions like root, both organisations takes young children from their families. Both wants to purge emotions from their members. Jedi are also making child soldiers just like shinobi. Both of the organisations does this thinking what they are doing is right, and for the good of galaxy/village.

They are ninja , they had to become ninja because they had to survive .
Warriors have Code of honour, not Ninjas and assassins.
Naruto's comment about rebuilding shinobi using template similar to what jedi have really soured my mood. I think it's a big insult to the memories of his comrades who fought and gave their lives beside him to protect and bring peace.

I almost stopped reading the story after learning about Sasuke (Please keep in mind that I don't hate sasuke or anything like that. I just want to read new and fresh stories , with new and interesting antagonists). But the story very is good and I still want to see where it goes.

Though I think the confession part of the chapter is lacking in quality compared to other previous chapters. I am not sure how to explain it, but I think you could do better.

- Ryder

I really wanted to see the three jedi and Naruto fight because of misunderstanding.

Great job please continue