|Reviews for King of Hearts|
| Read at your own risk chapter 5 . 7h
This is slightly confusing though, the ball was supposed to be full of important aristocrats, right? But the guy Sakua talked to seemed like a common person?
Syaroan talking credit for Sakura's family and her well-being is unjustified. While it is due to being Syaroan's sorceress, he isn't actively doing anything to promote their well-being, it's something someone else from the palace is overlooking and ensuring, would be done regardless of who, what and when. Unless you count the ladies in waiting he fruitlessly assigned to her.
| Read at your own risk chapter 6 . 7h
Syaoran here seems a bit too possessive and self important. For a kid, like he was in the manga and anime, it's okay, but as a 21 year old, it's something he'd outgrown. Like in the last few episodes and the movie, he seemed to be over his supremacy syndrome.
| Wren Truesong chapter 18 . 12/7/2016
Welp that's torn it I am now dead of squee *flings joy at you like confetti*
| thea chapter 18 . 10/31/2016
It's a wonderful story
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/19/2016
OMG THIS FIC IS SO GOOOOOOOOOD SSFHJJFSSHKKJGDSS I WANT MORE. PLEASE MEVER STOP WRITING SYAOSAKU FICS. *screams*
| kameis chapter 6 . 8/27/2015
| animefangurlcraz chapter 18 . 2/12/2015
wished sakura got together with another man to make syaoran more jealous. the story seemed a little rushed, but it came to a beautiful ending. your writing was just as generous as sakura's character. great job again!
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/11/2014
Rei is a magic-sucking bitch
She's lying to Syaoran, killing Sakura, and probably killed Yelan too
Now THIS is bewitchment
And honestly Syaoran, you're dense. Your mom wanted you happy regardless of who you chose, baka!
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/10/2014
Haven't read the rest of the chapter yet, but it would've been so awesome had you named the newspaper the Tsubasa Chronicles hahaha
| Steveaaml chapter 18 . 11/4/2014
Great allusions to CCS episodes throughout, lovely characters, and a thrilling plot. Tomoyo and Eriol were particularly wonderful.
| Steveaaml chapter 10 . 11/4/2014
AAAHHHHHHH! So sad! Goodness. Heartbreaking.
But on less sad points: the "you're a kind person, Syaoran-kun" conversation! The handkerchief! "And the other thing"!
| Steveaaml chapter 9 . 11/4/2014
Favourited this story as of this chapter.
The whole chapter felt like the elevator episode of CCS. Not just the bit with the cliff, but the whole arc with him denying and gradually accepting his feelings, bookended with Syaoran reflecting. Loved it.
| Steveaaml chapter 7 . 11/4/2014
Favourite chapter so far.
| Steveaaml chapter 6 . 11/4/2014
Oh good. Syaoran nursing a baby pig. Very good way to make up for his jerky behaviour up to this point.
| FairyLove5 chapter 18 . 7/16/2014
I like your story. It was really interesting. You should definitly continue writing!