Reviews for Yellow
jk chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
ohh man you went there. I cant believe you did. I'm so disappointed in you. Why in the fuck would she be all...its dark, am I dead, am I in hell, oh theres Edward this must be heaven cause hes an angel!
are you fucking serious with this bullshit?
its just as bad as the stories where shes in a coma and shes talking to herself like...its sooo dark...who is that talking? where am I?...I fucking hate that shit

this story just went from ok to complete childish shit in one chapter...good job
its like you take all the stupid parts out of other stories and added them to yours
jk chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
but home had found me...what a strange thing to say about a player that just toyed with you. He said he didn't love her and that he wanted to move on and not to worry about him that he was easily distracted...aka a whore sooooo I just think that's a weird fuckng comment for her to make and why in the hell is she crying? hes been gone for 9 months! almost fucking year youd think she'd be over that shit...why would she fall apart like that anyway? shes human she doesn't feel the mating bond so its just first love heart break she should be over that shit expecially with a hot wolf all over her
and jake sees that bellas not at their apartment so he immediately goes to the cops so that hes transported want us to believe that he just ditched bella? just like that? that's sooo stupid I cant even tell you how much...the story is ok but seriously you need to rethink some shit
jk chapter 7 . 11/5/2015
poor jake, damn bellas a fuckin prude!
jk chapter 5 . 11/5/2015
why does this pathetic little bitch always talk in her sleep? like its a cute trait to not really!
SugarVenom chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
Wow! A great story!
SugarVenom chapter 3 . 10/22/2011
Very creative. I love the pace.
HesMyBelAmi chapter 10 . 1/19/2011
WHAT HAPPENED TO BELLA? lol You got me on the edge of my seat!
americanlatinajapanesegirl chapter 10 . 11/27/2010
i would love to know wat happens next. update soon!
moore8879 chapter 10 . 11/15/2010
Love it!
IcarusToSun chapter 10 . 11/14/2010
OMG! Edward changed her? Oh dear! How are they going to explain this to Charlie?

Loved the way you wrote about Charlie and his feelings about Renee. And loved how he described the Cullen apartment:)

Thank you. Please update soon:)
IcarusToSun chapter 9 . 11/14/2010
Holy crap! What will be the consequence of Edward

revealing himself like that? Will Bella be ok? Please update soon!

Thanks a bunch for the chapter!

wantonlytoread chapter 8 . 11/2/2010
Good choice no Jacob, he is too young and selfish no good for Bella. Love Edwards tenacity to find her. Keep going you are doing well. Thanks for your story.
IcarusToSun chapter 8 . 10/23/2010
Thank you so much for not following through with JakexBella lemonade! Phhew!:) Huge relief for me:)

Loved this chapter. Loved how Edward's car pulls up next to Bella. And loved how she feels that home has found her:)

Thank you. Please update soon!
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 7 . 10/22/2010
(sobs uncontrolaby)

i liked ur origanal idea it makes sooo much more sensce thats the reason y jake left

srry but imma jake bella fan sometimes edward cnt really make up my mind but talor lautner is sexyy lol

plz plz plz plz plllZ put up the lemon chap puleasse im dying to read it!

Anyway this chap was amazing Jake nd eddie better save bella in time she cant die lol

i would prefer jacob to save her cuz then he would b her knight in shining armor instead of edward anyway witchever way you take this story im going to lov it!

And please put up the leamon chap pleaseeeee?

Plz plz plz update soon

cnt wait to read mooree!
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 5 . 10/22/2010
Aww u poor thing relashonships suck lol im in high skook nd still havent told the guy that i hav a huge crush on that i like him

lol I ABSOLUTLY LOVE this story

its amazing

i always loved jake nd bella and wanted to kno what would of haopened if they did take off

pior charlie i feel really bad for him and alice cuz jazz left her

eddie will recive zero sympaty from me im afraid he iz dumb for leaving her nd whats he gunna do when he finds her drag her back to forks lol

I lov lov lov lov lovvvv this

cnt wait ti
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