|Reviews for The Breakfast Club|
| kittygirl998939 chapter 16 . 1/23
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 16 . 10/1/2013
I really hope you write your sequel one day, because I'd love to know if Spock is able to save Jim from the terrors of Tarsus. Great story!
| Alex chapter 16 . 10/1/2013
I really hope you write that sequel one day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
"Spock. You understand the error of your ways."... OMG LOL! I laugh everytime I read that XD...
| LucyWithoutDiamonds chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
This story is great. I'm definitely going to look up the movie now. Please, please write a sequel. One where they all get back together and Jim's all sorts of fucked up from Tarsus. You mentioned writing it in an earlier authors note, and it's an awesome idea.
| K chapter 16 . 7/3/2013
That was absolutely amazing. Your character matchups were perfect and so was there characterization :)
| SkyLux16 chapter 16 . 6/30/2013
This was Amazing. So I'm going through Tumblr and see this post. You have no idea how badly I was dying, craving to read a story like this. I'm glad you wrote it. It was perfect, my sister was laughing while I read it to her, also cursing like a sailor. Thank you for writing it.
| TARDIS BLUE PROPHET chapter 16 . 6/24/2013
Wow, I remember why I loved the breakfast club when I was younger. Thank you.
| Serendox chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
Hahaha TWILIGHT XD You are so right Jim, it is totally not literature.
| svrldsmntls chapter 16 . 11/1/2011
this story was beyond freaking awesome! 3
| GabbyKat13 chapter 16 . 10/7/2011
I am in love thank you so much, and sadly this feels like only the beginning og a bigger story just like the movie. You are great and wonderful and yup so going to fav this an just so you know i can never watch that movie agian an not see them, but that so ok with me.
| MyOwnPersonalNote chapter 16 . 9/21/2011
I loved the part with the eyeliner! "Are you saying...that's actual Vulcan blood? From your actual people?"..."Not at all." Lol amazing. Overall, it was pretty nice! Read this within two hours, and I'll tell you that it was the highlight of my day! The jokes were funny, and I loved that you fit that farm animal thing in there. ;)
| Fox-sama94 chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
thought the name of the high school was funny. :p
| aristicats11 chapter 16 . 3/21/2011
I admit, I didn't expect much when I read the summary of this story. I expected poor character dialog, horrible plots, idiotic jokes, and Mary Sues galore.
You have proven me wrong, big time. This story was...well. Surprisingly it captured High School-ness while appealing to my likes?
I don't know. I like how they all hate each other/are annoyed at first, but they slowly bond together. I haven't watched The Breakfast Club so I'm not sure how the plot goes to that. But man, this story was a diamond amongst coal! I like how you payed attention to all of their home lives, not JUST on Spock and Jim.
How Bones confessed to wanting to be a Doctor, Uhura a linguistics, Chevok...er...didn't really give us anything there but anyway, its like a slight foreshadowing.
Know what would make me happy? A sequel! Maybe at first a slight overview in third person about what happened during the next year, then a time jump to each of their perspectives. And they slowly make choices that sort of go along with canon, but still AU, to meet each other? I don't know, but if your interested in making one, I'll gladly help you along with ideas.(I won't actually write it..but you know)
Once again, funny story. Made me giggle and smile, nice job.
| tierranranfar chapter 16 . 2/13/2011
I'm curious to see how Spock reacts to having a bondmate living through tarsus IV :). Anyway, great story!