|Reviews for Second chances|
| Fate12343 chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
You should legit, update ;)
| Taeniaea chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
| xNagisaChan chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
You should deffinitely update this :O I'm really wondering how Precia is going to handle this.. there aren't much stories of her out there and I'm kind of curious as to where this story is going so please update?
| NGTM-R chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Okay, I'll try not to give you both barrels, but...
Details. Spelling and grammar for starters. "your" is different from "you're" which is a consistent mistake. (Also capitalization after a question mark.)
Exclamation points do not belong in sentences which are supposed to be said in a soothing tone.
And the Bureau has a different year-scheme that I would have expected Precia to be familiar and use since she's from Midchilda. They operate by AC. (They don't give an AC date for the first two series, but working backwards by relative character ages and the date for StrikerS it's probably AC 0065.)
This is an interesting concept, mind you. I just think the level of spit and polish is lacking.
| FateSkyFire chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Well its an interesting start. I would love to see how this continues on. Hope to see ya update soon .
Good work, happy writing!
| Taeniaea chapter 1 . 10/11/2010