Not OC. Actually a very delightful chapter.

Omg just one chapter and I'm laughing alone in the middle of the street like an idiot. I luuuv your writing!

Noooooo that can't be the end :( I really liked the fic itself but gotta admit, kind of feeling let down by the ending. Such is life though. Hope you do a sequel eventually. Will follow you in case that happens

I'm actually a little sad that it's over. Fantastic writing as always. Thanks for sharing this fic.

This was a nice, short Zutara fic. Thanks for sharing!

It's been a while since you've posted anything but if you get back into fanfic writing I'd love to see a sequel for this I seem to fall in love with everything you write, it's so good.

This is a great story with a realistic ending. Not everything is fixed, the characters aren't all together but life continues onward, one journey at a time. Great story, and favorite line was from Iroh and Sokka about the unusual hire and spicy outfits!

Woo! Dude this story was fantastic. I absolutely loved HMPB, but I can really see how well your writing has improved over the years. This was written beautifully. And also the plot was amazing. It felt VERY Avatar-ish, but it was also like really satisfying in the Zutara department. Also this is my favorite rendition of Sokka like ever. I was cackling. Love it! And I would LOVE to see a sequel!

You've got these two down pat. They're so similar in some areas and so radically different in others and good God, I am totally held hostage on this ship. Zuko and Katara's interactions are A-plus-plus, as always. It's so interesting to see how they keep being drawn to each other as they build a connection, and yet keep hurting each other again and again, stubborn and traumatized teenagers that they are. I am looking forward to seeing how this would play out.

binge read this and i loved it. thank you for this fic! you nailed Katara and Zuko's characterization. I loved that Sokka wouldn't be that upset if Katara was ok with Zuko (or maybe my interpretation)

Urine is not sterile. It has bacteria in it. Peeing on a wound is a bad idea. Sadly this is an urban legend that has persisted in spite of all evidence to the contrary.

Loved it was a very interesting read and creative even if some parts were cliche! Good ficlet!

THIS. WAS. SO. DAMN. GOOOOOOD.

You're a brilliant, brilliant, brilliant writer!

Can I hope for a sequel in the future?

Because this story is so bloody good.

good one

This was fantastic! Characterization was spot on. Iroh's bits were hilarious, and you developed Zuko and Katara's relationship so...naturally. SO GOOD.