This was super cute, it had me laughing lol, love the humor and especiallly love the Momo and Sokka moments.

"Those hawks were loyal to the Empire."

This fic has some great lines, case in point see above example :)

" as the father of four teenage daughters..."

I really love how you portray fire nation as humans as well, of course through our dear Zuko but also through random soldiers who hardly ever get to be mentioned in stories, some of them good, some evil, some moderate...with lives and families and customs and care for others if its in their personality.

like Lt. Nu or the doctor who was acting very much like a concerned and professional doctor. it is not black and white, and you make a clear and realistic line between ordinary fire nation people ( who come in all shades ) and Ozai and his intentionally inhuman fire lord policies that he imposes on everyone . It makes it much realistic .

it is a relief to read your story, thanks a lot :)

OMG! This fic is so cute! The story has such a uniqe flow to it! BTW, Zutara is my fav OTP! It's hard to find fics that are for my age and of my paring but this one is spot on! I would be so excited if you did a sequel for this! Keep up your amazing writing and don't let anyone hate on your ship! Zutara 4 Life!

Wow! I really love your work and applaud your ability to intertwine three different plot lines while still staying true to character. I would die for a sequel! I can't seem to get enough of your writing.

Reading this story was absolutely fantastic and I enjoyed every moment of it 3

Yes! If you ever want to write a sequel, I AM THERE. Please please please finish the King's Pet or the King first, but I actually loved this story. I loved how sweet Katara and Zuko got near the end, my heart was in my throat when Zhao captured her, I cheered so loud when she burned Zhao with the tea and Zuko rescued her, and the fact that Zuko rescued her, did his best to keep his identity secret and expected nothing from her in return...that's the Zuko I know and love. I gotta say, that all that sweetness and tenderness is something sorely missed in the Katto series, which I am immensely enjoying as well and hope really really soon there's another update there. But also, again I would like to emphasize that if you want to start a sequel to this and you would finish it, I would read it.

I really enjoyed this story and really hope you decide to do a continuation for it!

Katara falling for pony tail Zuko is one of my guilty pleasures. XD

I see them as soul mates, so for me it's totally both possible & believable for them to get together at any time.

Ty for sharing your story! I seriously look forward to more!

#ZutaraForever!

I just binged the entire fanfic and it was absolutely awesome! Thanks for sharing this story :)

Well done! Such an open ending. A sequel would be most appreciated. I like the different point of views. I think sokka stood out in this story. He was on point. now on to continue reading The kings pet or the king. Yaaay!

This story was so good! thank you for all the hard work you put into it. Loved every minute of it and I am so glad that katara didnt fapp into some kind of helpless trap (especially with the blue spirit around) like a lot of fanfics make it. Beautiful work!

I really like this story and I how I could imagine it in the actual show. All the different side stories and how everyone ends up in the end is nice. Thanks for writing another great story!

Oh iroh

What a fun little story! I loved all the plots you worked in, too, but I think my favourite was Sokka's storyline - you write him so well :) The Zutara plotline played out really well, too, though I'm a little sad the epilogue didn't offer much in the way of a satisfying conclusion to the arc you wrote for them. All in all, though, this was a really fun little story - thanks for sharing it :)

Still up for a sequel?