|Reviews for An Adjustment of Plans|
| Thunderweb chapter 17 . 2/20
Ewwwww I love the waxing part!
There is deep trust between Soundwave and Ratchet. Comfort and pleasure come in tow. The entire scene makes me happy.
| Thunderweb chapter 23 . 2/20
I've read it several times, but it never stops fascinating me. Soundwave has future: a lover, friends, and the clan. I want to see him thrive once again!
| Angryanimeperv64 chapter 23 . 2/19
Such a touching and great story please update soon but also take your time
| mmouse15 chapter 23 . 1/25
I love the way you write. This chapter has been a very positive one, and I am greatly cheered by reading it. I like that Soundwave had a small glitch when Optimus praised him - that was a nice tie-back to the earlier damage analysis.
I also really like how you write Starscream. He's been damaged emotionally by decavorns of distrust, and he will continue to test Optimus and the other Autobots, even as he's working to end the war. It's a brilliant psychological insight into Starscream's mind.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/16
Love this fic!
| TFRock chapter 9 . 1/7
"Jazz will have kittens."
I find that as a unintentional pun. You know, Steeljaw is cat like. so... 'kittens' baby cats. Anyone else laugh at that? No? Just me? Okay.
| TFRock chapter 2 . 1/7
I can't stop crying... CURSE YOU EMOTIONS!
| Sideslip chapter 23 . 1/6
Some incredible background here. Have to wonder how the arrival of the refugees will affect the relationship between Ratchet and Soundwave. Perhaps with the new perspective on the Prime, Soundwave can have a "healthier" relationship? Maybe?
| StarCaptain299 chapter 23 . 1/4
I just wanted to draw your attention to a possible mistake in your latest chapter. Frenzy had left Optimus' office with Ratchet and Starscream, but suddenly he's back in the office again with Optimus and Soundwave at the end of the chapter. You may have missed to mention when he returned.
Thank you for your wonderful work.
Best of Luck,
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/3
plez right more
| ofDust chapter 23 . 12/30/2013
Sorry. I was on my phone and it glitched and posted my review before i was ready. What i was trying is there were shortages in the metals needed for new frames, right? (I need to go back and reread your fic to double check that fact...) I wonder how soundwave will react to that and how they will eventually work around that once everything settles down.
| ofDust chapter 23 . 12/30/2013
The noise I made when I saw this updated was inhuman.
I really want to see what happens when Soundwave is reunited with Killaglitch. I thought Killa was kinda interesting in the Song and Ravage story and it will be interesting to see their reactions to each other after all this time. Also really glad you included Glit. I hope he and Ratchet can interact at some point.
On another note, I wonder what Ratchet will think about Soundwave wanting to have kids. I think he will be more cautious, especially with the lack of
| Animelvr chapter 23 . 12/26/2013
Thanks for updating! Well done
| theboombox chapter 23 . 12/23/2013
So happy to see this great fic is still going! This is one of the best I've read.
| Bluebird Soaring chapter 23 . 12/22/2013
Amazing chapter! Everyone is back safe and sound, and we get to see the deepening of some relationships, and the starting of others. I'm excited to see new symbots arrive on base...and that it brings Soundwave hope and perhaps a new purpose. Curious to see what his conversation with Ratch is like about having their own kiddos - I think it will go well IMO.
Starscream and Prime - Prime giving him a hug was super cute. I wondered if Star was really hoping for something more right then - almost looked like they might kiss, but that would have been really silly given how it is building. So, Optimus was flying with Starscream when he got plastered all those years ago...fun times, fun times )
Thanks for a wonderful Christmas present!