Reviews for With the Shifting of the Sun
Quill Scribblings chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Whoa, the similies you use are just inspiring! Really well written, keep it up! LL x
GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
That last line is amazing
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
WOW!What a lovely lovely description!
ZephyrDragon chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Dammit! I've found mistakes...

'as Remus lay in a field' should be 'lies'

'Hogwarts it is like its own little community' should be 'Hogwarts is'

'and pale skin' should be 'and his pale skin'

and I think the gold band should have the diamonds 'in', not 'on'

Shouldn't your beta pick up on these? P *shakes head at self*

Anyway, I still LOVE this...
ariex04 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I like this. The story itself is hopeful and peaceful, but that last phrase, "the sunlight bleeds through his lids, as red as blood" reminds us all that it isn't going to happen that way... Nice job with this story!
trashkitty chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
I love this as a one-shot. It's so beautifully written and leaves so many rooms for questions about before, after... and during. It's them together but not so obvious (like a ACTUAL couple! :P). So lovely...